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Unit3TheworldofcoloursandlightSectionⅦWriting——如何写参观报告写作技法指导[文体指导]参观报告类的作文要求作者把参观的整个过程都完整地叙述出来，并侧重对参观过程的所见所闻进行详细描述。一般来说，既然是参观的报告，肯定是已经发生了的事情，所以作文的主要时态应该是一般过去时态。参观报告类的作文一般采取“三段式结构”：1．开头简要说明参观的总体情况：参观的目的地、参观的时间、所见所闻和遇到的人等。2．主体对整个参观的过程进行详细的描述，特别需要注意的是：(1)要以恰当合理的顺序把所看到的景物等表述出来。(2)既要描述所见还要有所感想。3．结尾对这次的参观做整体的评价。[亮点句式]1．LastSundayI/wevisited...2．Iwastouchedby...3．Therearesomanybeautifulplacesofinterest...4．Everyyearmanyvisitorsareattractedby...5．Ithinkweshouldtakesomemeasuresto...6．I/Wehavegotalotfromthisvisit...7．I/Wecan'twaittowrite...8．Inaword...满分佳作构建[写作任务]根据下面的要点，写出参观上海的所见所闻和所感。1．我和父母去了上海，很多漂亮的建筑给我留下了深刻的印象。2．我们先去了美丽的黄浦江，又去了繁忙的南京路，并在那儿享受了购物的乐趣，最后我们去了一个展览馆并观看了一场有趣的科幻电影。3．这次去上海的参观很好。[审题谋篇]体裁参观报告时态以一般过去时为主主题参观上海的所见所闻和所感人称以第一人称为主结构第一段：参观时间、地点及总体印象。第二段：详述参观过程。第三段：参观后的感受。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．______________v．给……留下印象2．______________n.风景3．______________adj.拥挤的4．__________________________adj.难以忘记的5．________________n.纪念品impressscenerycrowdedunforgettablesouvenir6．__________________动身去……7．______________________此外8．______________________做……很高兴9．__________________________一个大的矩形画廊beofftoinadditionhavefunindoingabigrectanglegalleryⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．上周末，我和我的父母去了上海。Lastweekend，I______________________________________withmyparents.2．一些海鸥正在海面上休息。Someseagulls______________________________________________________ofthesea.wasofftoShanghaiwererestingonthesurface3．之后，我们去了南京路，它是非常繁忙和拥挤的。Afterthat，wewenttoNanjingRoad，_________________________________________________．4．此外，我们参观了一个大的矩形画廊，在那里我看到了一部有趣的科幻电影。___________________，wevisited_____________________________________________aninterestingsciencefictionmovie.5．我永远不会忘记那次难忘的经历。Iwillnever________________________________________________．whichwasverybusyandcrowdedInadditionabigrectanglegallery，whereIsawforgettheunforgettableexperience(二)句式升级6．那儿有一些漂亮的楼房，给我留下了深刻印象。(用非限制性定语从句升级)Therearesomebeautifulbuildings，andtheyimpressedmeverymuch.→_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therearesomebeautifulbuildings，whichimpressedmeverymuch.7．我从没见过这么漂亮的景色。(用倒装句升级)Ihadneverseensobeautifulscenery.→__________________________________________________________________________NeverhadIseensobeautifulscenery.8．我们买了一些纪念品，并且享受到了购物的乐趣。(用现在分词作状语升级)Weboughtsomesouvenirs，andwehadgreatfuningoingshopping.→__________________________________________________________________________Buyingsomesouvenirs，wehadgreatfuningoingshopping.[妙笔成篇]_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Lastweekend，IwasofftoShanghaiwithmyparents.Shanghaiisabigcity.Therearesomebeautifulbuildings，whichimpressedmeverymuch.Firstly，wewenttotheHuangpuRiver.Itwaslongandsomeseagullswererestingonthesurfaceofthesea.NeverhadIseensobeautifulscenery.Afterthat，wewenttoNanjingRoad，whichwasverybusyandcrowded.Buyingsomesouvenirs，Ihadgreatfungoingshoppingthere.Inaddition，wevisitedabigrectanglegallery，whereIsawaninterestingsciencefictionmovie.Itwasgreat.Ienjoyedthisvisitverymuch.Iwillneverforgettheunforgettableexperience.