Unit3BacktothepastSectionⅦWriting——演讲稿写作技法指导[文体指导]演讲稿属于应用文的一种,是为演讲准备的书面材料,通常用于对人们普遍关注的事物或问题发表意见、提出建议、发起倡议等。其基本结构如下:1.称呼:点明听众。2.主体:点明主题,分析问题,根据具体问题提出具体的解决办法。该部分通常可分为两个段落来写:第一段指出演讲的主题,第二段分析具体问题,并给出解决办法。3.结尾:发起倡议。切记结尾一定要简洁。[亮点句式]1.我区分不开这两个单词。Ican'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetwowords.2.你能就如何准备这种竞赛给我一些建议吗?Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtoprepareforthiskindofcontest?3.你能告诉我学英语的最佳方法吗?CanyoutellmethebestwayoflearningEnglish/tolearnEnglish?4.听说你在说英语方面有困难,我很难过。I'msorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinspeakingEnglish.5.参加英语课程很重要,因为你能向老师学习并和你的同学一块练习说英语。ItisimportanttotakeanEnglishcourse,asyouwillbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticespeakingEnglishwithyourfellowstudents.6.学唱英语歌应该是一个好主意。ItshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingEnglishsongs.7.等车时,我会看英文报纸。Whilewaitingforabus,IwouldreadEnglishnewspapers.8.只要坚持你就一定能成功。Aslongasyoukeepontrying,youaresuretosucceed.9.提高写作的最好方法就是尽可能多地练习写作。Thebestwaytoimproveyourwritingistopracticewritingasmuchasyoucan.10.你写得越多,你就会知道如何使用你从阅读和听力中学到的东西。Themoreyouwrite,themoreyouwillknowhowtousewhatyou'velearnedfromreadingandlistening.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是迎光中学的高一新生李新,学校将为高一新生举办主题为“WhatIWanttoLearnintheSeniorMiddleSchool”的英语演讲活动,以让新生规划自己高中的学习、生活。请结合自身看法与以下要点准备一份演讲稿。要点包括:1.学会学习:养成良好的学习习惯(可举例说明)……2.学会与人相处:对人真诚、友善,帮助别人,与人相处融洽……3.培养良好的品质:坚定、乐观,挑战困难,努力实现梦想……写作要求:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[审题谋篇]体裁演讲稿时态一般现在时主题未来规划人称第一人称结构第一段:指出演讲主题第二段:写出题干所给三个要点第三段:个人愿望或者信念[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1._________________________养成好的学习习惯2.___________以……为基础3.__________________________与别人相处得好4.________________________________与……有好的关系formgoodlearninghabitsbebasedongetalongwellwithothershaveagoodrelationshipwith...5.______________________培养好品质6.__________乐观的7.________________尽一切努力8._____________________克服困难9._______________引领我们前行10.___________________________充实地度过我每一天的生活developgoodqualitiesoptimisticmakealleffortsovercomedifficultiesleadusforwardlivemylifetothefullestⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1.首先,我应该养成好的学习习惯以确保我能学好。First,Ishould____________________________________thatIcanlearnwell.formgoodlearninghabitstomakesure2.而且,一个班级就像一个家庭,我应与别人相处好。Furthermore,aclassislikeafamily.Ishould__________________________.3.如果我们对别人忠诚、友善,我们就能与他们有一个好的关系。Ifwe______________________________,wecanhavegoodrelationshipswiththem.getalongwellwithothersaresincereandkindtoothers4.我们的决心帮助我们挑战并克服困难。我们的梦想引领我们前行。Ourdetermination__________________________________.Ourdreamleadsusforward.helpsuschallengeandovercomedifficulties(二)句式升级5.用高级词汇替换句1中的“first和should”两个词______________________________________________________________________________________________6.用定语从句改写句2______________________________________________________________________________________________Tobeginwith,IamsupposedtoformgoodlearninghabitstomakesurethatIcanlearnwell.Furthermore,aclassislikeafamilywhereIshouldgetalongwellwithothers.7.用onlyif倒装句改写句3______________________________________________________________________________________________8.用强调句改写句4中的两个分句并用and连接_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onlyifwearesincereandkindtootherscanwehavegoodrelationshipswiththem.Itisourdeterminationthathelpsuschallengeandovercomedifficultiesanditisthedreamthatleadsusforward.[妙笔成篇]Ladiesandgentlemen,Goodmorning!I'mLiXin.Ifeelitanhonortogiveaspeechhereabout“WhatIWanttoLearnintheSeniorMiddleSchool”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.【参考范文】Ladiesandgentlemen,Goodmorning!I'mLiXin.Ifeelitanhonortogiveaspeechhereabout“WhatIWanttoLearnintheSeniorMiddleSchool”.Actually,whatIwanttolearnmostareasfollows.Tobeginwith,IamsupposedtoformgoodlearninghabitstomakesurethatIcanlearnwell.Clearly,successfulstudyisbasedongoodwaysandhabits.Furthermore,aclassislikeafamilywhereIshouldgetalongwellwithothers.Buthow?Asweknow,onlyifwearesincereandkindtootherscanwehavegoodrelationshipswiththem.Finally,Iwilllearntodevelopgoodqualitieslikebeingdetermined,beingoptimisticandsoon.Ofcourse,don'tforgettosetadreamandmakealleffortstorealizeit.Itisourdeterminationthathelpsuschallengeandovercomedifficultiesanditisthedreamthatleadsusforward.IbelieveIwilllivemylifetothefullestintheseniormiddleschool.Thankyou.