[技法指导]本单元的写作话题是介绍旅游景点,要求学生用书信的形式写关于旅游的说明文,向不同民族的朋友介绍异国的旅游景点、风土人情,并提出合理的旅游建议。内容常常是有关目的地情况的基本介绍,包括推荐旅游景点和游览项目,以及旅途注意事项等。介绍旅游景点时,通常按以下步骤进行:第一部分为导入部分,即针对“对方”的一些情况,引出相关旅游目的地的话题。第二部分为对旅游目的地的介绍。这是文章的主体部分。列举旅游目的地的特征,找准切入点,采用合理的说明顺序,将特征有条理地呈现。第三部分通常为旅游建议。行文时,可以就旅游安全,包括人身安全和财产安全等作温馨提示。最后可以用“表示愿意提供帮助,并祝旅途愉快”等语句结束全文。在写作时要注意:1.客观、科学地介绍某一个城市或地点,应该突出其特点,给人以可信的感觉。2.所用语言要准确、地道,以事实服人。因而事例应客观真实、准确详尽,且要注意双方情感的交流,体现语言的交际功能。3.层次清楚,条理分明:应该由浅入深、由易到难、由外到内、从上到下、从左到右、从远到近、由表及里,先写外观,再写内在的特征、特性以及作者的感受和给读者留下的深刻印象。4.注意合理地运用过渡词语,将各自然段有机地结合在一起,使整篇文章过渡自然、条理清晰。5.要准确使用表示方位的词及短语,同时要注意详略得当,重点部分要突出。[黄金表达]1.问候语①Hello,mydearvisitors.Welcometo...②It'ssonicetomeetyouhere!③Ifeelitagreathonourtobeyourtourguidetoday.④I'dliketotakethisopportunitytogiveyouabriefintroductionabout...2.景点介绍①Itwasbuiltin...soithadaverylonghistory.②Itislocated/situated...,withanareaof...③Ithasbecomeamostpopulartouristattractionsince...④Withitspleasantclimate,richnaturalresourcesandpicturesquescenery,...isoneofChina'smajortouristcities.3.结束语①Pleaseallowme,then,totakethisopportunitytothankyouforyourcooperationandunderstanding.②Wishyouhaveagoodtimeandenjoyyourself.③Ifyouhaveachancetovisitit,youaresuretohaveagoodtimethere.[典题演练]假设你是李明,你想邀请你的笔友Tony来益阳旅游。请给他写一封信,为他介绍你的家乡益阳。要点如下:1.空气和水质量好,绿化面积大,环境未被污染,气候宜人,是全国宜居城市;2.民风淳朴,益阳人民热情好客;3.著名的食物与景点有擂茶和周立波故居等。注意:1.词数100左右;2.切勿逐字翻译,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:擂茶grindingtea;周立波故居formerresidenceofZhouLiboDearTony,WelcometoYiyangofChina.Yours,LiMing谋篇布局1.体裁:说明文2.话题:介绍家乡益阳3.时态:一般现在时4.人称:第一人称和第三人称为主联想词汇1.气候宜人__________________答案:pleasantweather答案2.绿化面积__________________答案:greenspace答案3.原来的环境;未被污染的环境______________答案:originalenvironment;unpollutedenvironment答案4.当地居民__________________答案:localpeople答案5.传统食物__________________答案:traditionalfood答案连词成句1.益阳气候宜人,是全国宜居城市之一。YiyangisoneofthebestcitiestoliveininChinaanditiswarm.→YiyangisoneofthemostdesirableplacestoliveinChinawhichenjoyspleasantweather.(升级句)2.益阳人民热情好客,民风淳朴。PeopleinYiyangarekindandwelcoming.→ThepeopleinYiyangarekindandwelcoming,andtheyhavesimplefolkcustoms.(升级句)3.著名的食物与景点有擂茶和周立波故居等。Thefamousfoodisgrindingtea,andZhouLibooncelivedthere.→Thefamousfoodisgrindingteawhichisdelicious.AndYiyangistheformerresidenceofZhouLibo,afamouswriterofChina.(升级句)连句成篇Dear_Tony,Welcome_to_Yiyang_of_China.Doyouknowaboutit?AndnowIwouldbeverypleasedtotellyousomethingaboutthissmallcity—myhometown.YiyangisoneofthemostdesirableplacestoliveinChinawhichenjoyspleasantweather.Ithasfreshairandexcellentwateraswellasmoregreenspaceandoriginalenvironment.I'msureyouwillbefascinatedbyitsuniquesceneryandbeautifulenvironment.AndthepeopleofYiyangarekindandwelcoming,andtheyhavesimplefolkcustoms.Therearealsomanytraditionalfoods.Thefamousfoodisgrindingteawhichisdelicious.AndYiyangistheformerresidenceofZhouLibo,afamouswriterofChina.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,Li_Ming[跟踪训练]假定你是李华,是北京欢乐谷的一名导游。请你根据以下要点,向一个英国中学生旅游团作一个简单的景点介绍:1.北京欢乐谷主题公园占地560,000平方米,于2006年7月对外开放;2.游客可以参与多项活动,多种设施可以满足不同年龄段人群的需要;3.可以观看多种精彩表演;4.参观时要注意安全。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:设施facility[精彩范文][名师点评]①IfeelhonouredthatIhavetheopportunitytobeyourtourguidetoday.that引导原因状语从句,不定式短语tobeyourtourguide作opportunity的后置定语。②openedtothepublicinJuly,2006是过去分词短语作BeijingHappyValley的后置定语。③whichwillsurelyimpressyoudeeply是which引导的非限制性定语从句,用来补充说明performances。[总评]全文涵盖了写作要求中的每一个点,条理清楚,重点突出。同时文中语言流畅,句式结构丰富多变。课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。(2019·合肥市高三调研性测试)ClassicalChinesegardendesignaimstocreateanaturallandscapeonasmallscaleandemphasizetheperfectharmonybetweenmanandnature.AChinesegarden__1__(be)likeascroll(卷轴)painting,__2__(show)aseriesofcarefullycomposedscenes.Newviewsarerevealedasonewalksalongthepathways.Inthegardens,__3__mostfrequentlymeettheeyearewindingpathsthatseeminglyleadtonowhere.There,apathseemstoend,butallof__4__sudden,anewworldisrolledoutbeforeyou:pavilions(亭子),rockformationsandspringwater—allcombinedtoprovideapleasantsurprise!Atthe__5__(enter)toaChinesegarden,thereisusuallyahugestoneorwall__6__(use)toscreenyourviewsoastolaterproduceunimaginabledelightwhenyouturnaroundthewall.AChinesegardenmayhavewindowsonall__7__(it)fourwalls.Anditis__8__(interest)that,throughthewindows,visitorsmayseedifferentviewsfromdifferentangles,andthusthecompositionofthegardenbecomesenlarged.AChinesegardenisaplacewherecultureisbothcreatedandenjoyed.Allplantsmarktheshiftof__9__(season).Similarly,water,asymboloftheeverchanging,__10__rocks,asymboloftheeternal(永恒的),createaharmoniousbalanceofnature'syinandyang.1.________2.________3.________4.________5.________6.________7.________8.________9.________10.________答案:1.is2.showing3.what4.a5.entrance6.used7.its8.interesting9.seasons10.and答案