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1．确定描写对象：★如果是名山大川，那么描写的重点是其形、色、态等自然风光方面的特点；★如果是名胜古迹，那么描写的重点应该是其古迹、社会价值等方面的特点；★如果是一个城市，那就要重点介绍这个地方的地理位置、人口、交通状况、气候条件、旅游景点等内容。SectionⅤWriting—介绍某一地点的说明文[写作技法指导]2．确定描写顺序：根据所描写的对象，确定适合的描写顺序。比如名川大山可以按照由近及远或由远及近，由高到低或由低到高等顺序进行描写；名胜古迹可以按照游览的顺序对其进行说明；介绍一个城市，则可以按照地理位置、人口、气候等顺序展开介绍。3．确定时态：描写地理位置、自然风光等时多用一般现在时，介绍历史情况时用过去时。4．另外，描写时要主次分明、详略得当。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章1．位置(Location)①...islocatedin...②...liesnear/infrontof/bythesideof/between/among/...③...standsatthefootof/onthetopof/...2．人口(Population)④...hasa(n)．..populationof...⑤...isa(n)...country,withapopulationof...3．面积(Area)⑥...has/coversanareaof...4．历史和文化(Historyandculture)⑦...hasahistoryof...years.⑧...isaleadingculturalcenterwith...⑨Builtin...,thebuildinghaswitnessedmanycomingsandgoingsinhistory.5．名胜(Placesofinterest)⑩...isoneofthemostwellknownplacesofinterestintheworld.⑪...isthebiggestcityin...,whichhasmanytouristattractions,suchas...历史有两千多年的历史。特点世界上最长的城墙，长6000多千米；建筑材料主要为石头、砖头，修建工作都是人工进行；主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台(watchtower)。现状世界著名的旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。[三步写作规范][题目要求]假定你是一名导游，你负责接待一个来自英国的旅游团，请你用英语向他们简要介绍一下长城。内容要点如下：注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Ladiesandgentlemen，WelcometotheGreatWall.I'mverydelightedtobeyourguidehere.Thanksagainforlistening.WishyouagoodtimeinBeijing!第一步搜索词汇1．介绍2．有……的历史3．建造；修建工作4．防御；保卫……以免受5．名胜aplaceofinterestintroductionhaveahistoryofconstructiondefend...against第二步巧用语法和句型1．长城长6000多千米，它是世界上最长的城墙。①TheGreatWallismorethan6,000kilometerslong.(并列句)②TheGreatWall,,___isthelongestwallintheworld.(定语从句)2．沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台。Therewerewatchtowersalongthewall.everyfewhundredmetersanditisthelongestwallintheworldwhichismorethan6,000kilometerslong3．长城是世界著名的旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。①TheGreatWallisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestintheworldeveryyear.(并列句)②TheGreatWallisitattractsmanyvisitorseveryyear.(such...that...)suchafamousplaceofinterestintheworldthatanditattractsmanyvisitorsTheGreatWall,whichismorethan6,000kilometerslong,isthelongestwallintheworld.Ithasahistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itismadeofstoneandbricksandalmostalltheconstructionwasdonebyhandwithoutanymachine.Asthewallwasbuilttodefendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,therewerewatchtowersevery第三步连接过渡成篇Ladiesandgentlemen，WelcometotheGreatWall.I'mverydelightedtobeyourguidehere.I'dliketotakethisopportunitytogiveyouabriefintroductiontotheGreatWall.fewhundredmetersalongthewall.Now,theGreatWallisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestintheworldanditattractsmanyvisitorseveryyear.It'ssowonderfulthatpeopleoftensaynovisittoBeijingiscompletewithoutavisittotheGreatWall.Thanksagainforlistening.WishyouagoodtimeinBeijing!