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说明文：描写动物[感悟范文]请根据下列提示写一篇关于蛇的短文。1．蛇是一种生活在草丛或阴暗地方的爬行动物；2．蛇的颜色多样，天敌很难发现；3．蛇的食物很多，比如老鼠、麻雀、鸟蛋等等；4．蛇样子可怕但是用处很多。注意：1.根据内容适当增加细节；2．词数120～150。[精彩范文]①Thesnakeisalongandthinanimalthatlivesingrassorotherdarkplaces.②Snakesusuallyhavegreen,yelloworblackskins,makingitdifficultfortheirenemiestofindthem.③Snakescantakemanythingsasfood,suchasmice,sparrows,frogs,birds'eggs,pestsandsoon.④Althoughsnakeshavenolegsorfeet,theycanmoveveryfastontheirstomachs.⑤Somekindsofsnakesliveinwater,wheretheycanswimasfreelyasfish.答案⑥Assnakesaredreadfullooking,peopleareafraidofthem.⑦Manypeopledrivethemawaywhenevertheyseesnakes.⑧However,snakesarenotasdreadfulastheylook.⑨Theycanhelpustokillmiceandpests.⑩Also,theycanprovideuswithdeliciousmeatandtheirbloodisagooddrink.⑪Poisonoussnakesareespeciallyuseful,withwhichwecanmakevaluabledrugs.答案亮点分析：1．文中多处用到含有定语从句的复合句，简洁得体。2．非谓语动词短语makingit...作状语使句式变得灵活多样。3．suchas,andsoon等短语的运用地道得当。4．运用连词although,as和whenever，使句式复杂，提升文章档次。5．副词“however”及“also”的运用使句子之间的衔接更加自然。答案[技法讨论]本模块的写作任务是动物描写。描写动物的书面表达属于事物介绍类说明文，以“说明”为主要表达方式，用来介绍动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等，可对描述的对象作总体概括介绍，给人以直观的总体认识，然后进行具体说明，使人全面深入地了解此种动物。事物介绍类说明文多用一般现在时。写文章时要注意行文的条理清晰，不能东一句、西一笔，缺乏章法。在动笔之前要安排好描述顺序，考虑好句与句之间的衔接、段与段之间的联系，并注意以下几点：1．要抓住事物特征描写事物要紧紧围绕事物的特征进行介绍，如：属性、外貌、状态、用途等，并且要突出事物的个性。普通特征可以略写，个性特征要详细介绍以突出特色。2.要生动形象描写事物如果只是中规中矩地描绘它的形状特点，用词过于简单化、专业化，那么事物永远是“死”物。要想让事物“鲜活”起来，就应该使用一些描绘性的词汇来突出被介绍事物的鲜明特点。如：pleasant,lovely,sweet,powerful,favourite,horrible,severe,funny,friendly,generous,brave,shy,firm,faithful等。[类文演练]请根据下面的表格，写一篇介绍华南虎的120～150词的文章。[联想词汇]1．重达________________答案：weigh答案2．以……为主食________________答案：feedmainlyon答案3．在野外________________答案：inthewild答案4．濒危________________答案：beendangered/indanger答案5．保护________________答案：protect答案6．惩罚________________答案：punish答案[单句写作]1．尾部有黑斑。①Itstail______________________.②Thereare______________________________.答案：①hasblackspots②blackspotsinitstail答案2．在野外华南虎的数量稀少。①Thereare_______________________________________________.②FewSouthChinaTigers__________________________________.答案：①fewSouthChinaTigersinthewild②liveinthewild答案3．华南虎濒危的原因是栖息地的减少和人类的捕杀。①SouthChinaTigeris_____________________________________.②Thereductionof_________________________________________.答案：①indangerbecauseofthereductionofitshabitatsandpartlybecauseofhuntingbyhumans②itshabitatsandhuntingbyhumanshaveleftitindanger答案[连句成章][精彩范文]SouthChinaTigerisanendangeredanimal,whosehabitatisinChina,exactlyspeaking,inSouthernChina,CentralChinaandEasternChina.SouthChinaTigerislargeandfierce.Themaletigercanweighabout190kilogramsandthefemaletigerabout110kilograms.Oneofitsmainfeaturesisthatitstailhasblackspots.Theyfeedmainlyonwildboarsandsambars.Now,therearemorethan70SouthChinaTigersinthereserveandfewliveinthewild.Thereductionofitshabitatsandhuntingbyhumanshaveleftitindanger.Asaresult,weshouldeducatepeopletoprotectitandpunishthosepoachersseverely.Besides,manmustn'tdestroytheirhabitats.Onlyinthiswaycanitspopulationincrease.答案课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。ClassicalChinesepoetryistraditionalChinesepoetry__1__(write)inClassicalChineseandtypifiedbycertaintraditionalforms.Many__2__(poem)comefromparticularhistoricalperiods,suchasthepoetryoftheTangDynastyandtheverseoftheSongDynasty.__3__(it)existencedatesbacktoatleastasearlyasthepublicationoftheClassicofPoetryorShijing.Thereare__4__(vary)combinationsofformsandgenres,mostof__5__aroseattheendoftheTangDynasty.DevelopmentofClassicalChinesepoetry__6__(active)continueduptotheyearof1919,whentheMayFourthMovement__7__(take)place,andisstillpopulareventoday.ClassicalChinesepoetrycreatedduringthis2,500yearperiodhasbeendevelopingcontinuously,__8__(produce)agreatdealofdiversity—classifiedbybothmajorhistoricalperiods__9__dynasticperiods.OfthekeyaspectsofClassicalChinesepoetryisitscloseinterrelationshipwithotherformsofChineseart,suchasChinesepaintingandChinesecalligraphy(书法).ClassicalChinesepoetryhasproventohaveastronginfluence__10__poetryworldwide.1．________2.________3.________4.________5．________6.________7.________8.________9．________10.________答案：1.written2.poems3.Its4.various5.which6．actively7.took8.producing9.and10.on答案