SectionⅤWritingModule4Music电子邮件文体感知本单元的写作任务是写一封电子邮件。电子邮件是书信的一种格式,主要由称呼、正文和落款三部分构成。在正文中有以下几点需要注意:1.邮件内容从问候语开始。要根据与收件人的关系密切程度来选择适当的称呼语。2.表明写作意图。在邮件开头就要表明写作意图,这样才能更好地引出邮件的主要内容。3.语言应简洁明了。电子邮件篇幅一般不太长,因此简洁明了的语言在表情达意中非常重要。增分佳句1.回复邮件开头常用句式:(1)Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter.(2)HowhappyIamwhenIknow...(3)Thanksforyourletter,it’smypleasuretodo...2.表达看法常用句式:(1)AsfarasIamconcerned...(2)Inmyopinion...(3)Asforme...(4)Personally,Iprefer...(5)Myownpointofviewisthat...3.结尾常用句式:(1)Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.(2)Iwouldalsoliketoknowifyoucan/could...(3)Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould/would...(4)Iwillappreciateitifyoucan...写作模板Dear________,Iamverygladtotellyouthegoodnews.Therewillbea______(内容)at/in______(地点)on________(时间).Wewouldbehonouredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat________(具体时间).Thiswillbefollowedbya________(进一步安排).Ataround________(时间),________(另一个安排).I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,________写作要求假定你是李华,想邀请留学生朋友Henry一起参加学校举办的主题为Chinesefolkmusic的活动。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.活动时间、地点;2.活动内容。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearHenry,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua审题谋篇体裁应用文时态一般现在时主题邀请朋友参加音乐会人称第一人称和第三人称结构第一部分:开门见山,点明活动的时间和地点;第二部分:介绍活动内容并发出邀请;第三部分:希望尽快得到对方答复词汇推敲1.___________关于2.______________尊敬,敬重3.______________赋予……生命(生命力、活力)4._____________________民间音乐/民歌5.______________另外regardinghonourgivelifetofolkmusic/songinaddition遣词造句1.完成句子①我写信邀请你参加我校在下个月10号下午两点举行的名为中国民间音乐的活动。I’mwritingto_________________________________________titledChineseFolkMusicinourschoolat2:00p.m.on10thnextmonth.②我认为它会给我们学校带来活力。Ithink_____________________ourschool.inviteyoutoparticipateintheactivityitwillgivelifeto③在活动的开幕式上,我们将有一个由一位著名的中国音乐家所做的关于中国民间音乐历史的报告。Attheopeningoftheactivity,wewillhaveaspeech______________thehistoryofChinesefolkmusicdeliveredbyafamousChinesemusician.④当考虑到你会对他们感兴趣,我诚恳地邀请你参加这项活动。_____________________thatyouwillbeinterestedinthem,Isincerelyinviteyoutotakepartinthisactivity.⑤如果你能尽早回复我会感到很荣幸。Iwould_________________ifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.regardingThinkingfeelhonoured2.句式升级⑥用which引导的定语从句合并句①和句②__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑦用appreciate的用法升级句⑤_____________________________________________________I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateintheactivitytitledChinesefolkmusicinourschoolat2:00p.m.on10thnextmonth,whichIthinkwillgivelifetoourschool.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.妙笔成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:DearHenry,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateintheactivitytitledChinesefolkmusicinourschoolat2:00p.m.on10thnextmonth,whichIthinkwillgivelifetoourschool.Attheopeningoftheactivity,wewillhaveaspeechregardingthehistoryofChinesefolkmusicdeliveredbyafamousChinesemusician.AndmanyChineseinstrumentswillbeplayed.Inaddition,someclassicChinesefolkmusicsuchasButterflyLoversandTheMoonOveraFountainwillbeperformedthen.Thinkingthatyouwillbeinterestedinthem,Isincerelyinviteyoutotakepartinthisactivity.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.Yours__truly,Li__Hua假定你是李华,现在正在某音乐学院就读,现请你用英语写一封电子邮件,向你的朋友吴斌介绍学音乐的好处。包括下列要点:1.音乐可以使我们放松身心,缓解压力;2.音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心;3.音乐能够抚慰我们的心灵,帮助我们走出困境;4.音乐可以帮我们更好地了解其他文化。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:DearWuBin,Asweallknow,musicplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.First,itcanmakeusfeelrelaxedbothmentallyandphysically,thushelpingusreduceourpressureatworkandinlife.Second,musiccanexciteandencourageusaswellwheneverwemeettroublesandfeelsad.What’smore,musiccanhaveacomfortingeffectwhenwe’reworriedandhelpusstepoutofdifficulties.Inaddition,music,asauniversallanguage,canbeofgreathelponthewaytohelpingustolearnothercultures.AsfarasI’mconcerned,musicispartofourlife.Wecan’tliveahappylifewithoutthecompanyofmusic.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua