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SectionⅤWriting——表达艺术喜好的议论文Module4FineArts—Western,ChineseandPopArts写作技法指导[文体指导]描述艺术喜好的内容及结构一般为：论点(提出观点即艺术作品比较受欢迎)——论证(描述其重要特征，讲明该艺术作品受欢迎的原因)——结论(观点和评价)。描述艺术喜好时一般以现在时和过去时相结合为主。人称一般以第一和第三人称为主。描述时从逻辑上讲要做到论据充分，论证合理，确保内容直接为主题句服务：从语言上讲要简洁得当，多用书面语，以增强文章的可信度。[亮点句式]点明主题(可用于开头或结尾)：1．Artplaysanimportantroleinmylife.2．Mylifewon'tbesointerestingwithoutart.3．Artistomewhatwateristofish.4．Artbrightensmylife.5．Artmakesmylifemorecolorful.细节阐述：6．WhenIwas...,Ilearntto...7．IdevelopedtheinterestinartwhenIwas.../attheageof...8．WhenIamunhappy,Iwillturntoartforjoy.9．WhenIamill,artcanmakeme...10．Lookingatthe...,Imayfeelfullofenergy.11．ThereasonwhyIlike/amfondofartisthat...12．Iwanttobeanartistlike...满分佳作构建[写作任务]你的笔友Bob在2018年春节期间来中国旅游，看到好多地方都贴着“鲤鱼跳龙门”这幅年画，但他看不懂图画的内容，请你给他简单描述图画内容，并说明中国人喜爱这幅画的理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．参考词汇：鲤鱼carp(单复数同形)；龙门DragonGate；湍急的swift；毅力perseverance[审题谋篇]体裁议论文时态一般现在时主题艺术喜好人称第三人称结构第一部分：引入主题。第二部分：介绍“鲤鱼跳龙门”这幅年画。第三部分：阐述中国人喜欢这幅画的原因。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．____________adj.传统的2．_____adj.有活力的；有生气的3．_______vt.实现4．__________喜欢traditionalaliverealisebefondofⅡ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．这是一幅传统的中国民间画，被称为“鲤鱼跳龙门”。ThisisatraditionalChinesefolkpictureandit___________“CarpjumpingovertheDragonGate”．2．这幅画深受中国人的欢迎和喜爱。Thispicture___________________________byChinesepeople.isknownasispopularanddeeplyloved3．你可以看到一条红鲤鱼正跃过大门。Youcan___________________________agate.4．这幅画意味着你应该努力工作以使梦想成真。Thepicturemeansthatyoushouldworkhardinorderto________________________．5．这就是中国人非常喜欢这幅画的原因。Thisisthereason____________________________________verymuch.seearedcarpjumpingovermakeyourdreamrealisedwhyChinesepeopleappreciatethispicture(二)句式升级6．用过去分词短语作定语和非限制性定语从句合并句1和句2______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．用表语从句改写句5__________________________________________________ThisisatraditionalChinesefolkpicture,knownas“CarpjumpingovertheDragonGate”，whichispopularanddeeplylovedbyChinesepeople.That'swhyChinesepeopleappreciateitverymuch.[妙笔成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]ThisisatraditionalChinesefolkpicture,knownas“CarpjumpingovertheDragonGate”，whichispopularanddeeplylovedbyChinesepeople.Youcanseearedcarpjumpingoveragate.Itlookswonderfullyalive.Asthelegendgoes,thecarpintheYellowRiverwantedtoachievetheirgoal.Theytriedtojumpovertheswiftriveragainandagainandonefinallysucceededandbecameareal“dragon”．Thepicturemeansthatyoushouldworkhardinordertomakeyourdreamrealised.Itisasymbolofcourage,perseverance,andachievementaswellasgoodluck.That'swhyChinesepeoplearefondofitverymuch.