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Module3TheViolenceofNatureSectionⅤWriting——自然灾害类文章写作技法指导[文体指导]自然灾害或灾难性事件主要是指自然灾害或人类行为导致的灾难性事件。写作时，要说明灾害发生的时间、地点和危害以及对自然灾害的补救措施、经验教训和建议，注意要采用客观态度，避免主观色彩。[亮点句式]1．灾害的发生：①Therewas/isaterribleearthquake/floodin...②Aterribleearthquake/floodhit/struck...③...happened/tookplace/brokeout.2．灾害的影响：①Thousandsofpeopleweremadehomeless.②Thedisastercaused...deaths/injuries.③Theflood/earthquakecausedgreatdamage/lossesto...3．采取措施及建议：①Atpresent，freshwater，foodandsheltersarebadlyneeded.②Fortunately，internationalsocietiesofferedtheirhelpinghandsshortlyaftertheearthquake—donatingclothes，foodandmedicine.③Inthemeantime，peoplenationwidearetakinganactivepartinraisingmoneyfordisasterareas.④Measureshavebeentakentohelp...满分佳作构建[写作任务]根据以下提示用英语写一篇关于某地地震情况的文章。题目为“ASevereEarthquake”。受灾情况：1．一万多人遇难，两万多人失踪；2．地震引发海啸(tsunami)与核电站爆炸(anuclearpowerstationexplosion)；3．引发很多问题：电力供应短缺，还出现饮用水安全危机……4．经济损失：估计已超过2000亿美元。注意：词数100左右参考词汇：救援队rescueteam；估计estimate[审题谋篇]体裁说明文时态一般过去时为主主题自然灾害人称第三人称结构第一部分：遇难及失踪人数，引发海啸；第二部分：电力供应短缺，饮用水危机；第三部分：经济损失。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．发生2．地震3．对……造成损失4．灾难5．造成occurearthquakecausedamagetodisastercauseⅡ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．一场强地震突袭，引发了很严重的海啸。Ahugeearthquakeoccurredsuddenly，and．2．更糟糕的是，出现了核电站爆炸，增加了人们的恐慌。____________，therewasanuclearpowerstationexplosion，anditaddedtopeople'spanic.What'sworsesentahightsunami(二)句式升级3．用现在分词短语作结果状语升级句14．用非限制性定语从句升级句2Ahugeearthquakeoccurredsuddenly，sendingahightsunami.What'sworse，therewasanuclearpowerstationexplosion，whichaddedtopeople'spanic.[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】ASevereEarthquakeAhugeearthquakeoccurredsuddenly，sendingahightsunami，causinggreatdamagetopeoplethere.Accordingtotherecentreport，morethan10，000werekilledandover20，000weremissing.What'sworse，therewasanuclearpowerstationexplosion，whichaddedtopeople'spanic.Thoughlotsofcountriessentmanyrescueteamstohelpthem，theywerestillintrouble.Theunexpecteddisasterresultedinplentyofproblems，suchastheshortageofelectricitysupply.Moreover，thenuclearpowerstationexplosionpollutedthefreshwaterinsomeareas，whichwasunfitforbabiestodrink.Butasdayspassedby，itwashopedthatthesituationwouldgetbetter.Asisestimated，thisdisasterhascausedalossofmorethan200billiondollars.