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Module3MyFirstRideonaTrainSectionⅤWriting——写游记类记叙文写作技法指导[文体指导]游记类记叙文的写作就是记述旅途中的所见所闻，并通过对当地的风土人情、山川地貌、人文景致、名胜古迹等方面的描写来表达作者的思想感情。写好此类文章一般需要注意以下方面：1．确定好写作的顺序，选择恰当的线索将游记中各个要素连接起来，可按照时间顺序来写；2．描写景物切忌面面俱到，要根据写作的主题有选择、有重点地写；3．在景物描写的基础上进而抒发自己的感情，也就是通过情景交融的方式把自己的思想感情渗透到所写的景物中。[亮点句式]1．段首常用语：(1)Iwentto...bytrain/bus.(2)Thatwasmyfirstvisitto...2．段中常用语：(1)Onthewayto...,we...(2)After...hours'riding...(3)Wedidnotstopenjoyingourselvesuntil...3．段尾常用语：(1)Wehadagoodtime/enjoyedourselves.(2)Thisisunusual/unforgettable...(3)I'llneverforget...(4)Iwillremember...forever.(5)ThiswasareallifechangingexperiencethatIwouldneverforget.(6)Wewereverytired,butwereallyhadawonderfulday.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假设你是李华，上周你和父母参加了某旅行社组织的上海三日游活动。请根据表格内容用英语写一篇游记。行程活动内容第一天参观东方明珠塔及外滩；乘观光游轮夜游黄浦江。第二天游览上海迪士尼主题乐园。第三天市内游玩；购物。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：东方明珠theOrientalPearlTower；外滩Bund；游轮cruiseship；迪士尼乐园Disneyland[审题谋篇]体裁记叙文时态一般过去时主题游记人称第一人称结构第一部分：简述旅行概况；第二部分：描述旅行过程及所见所闻；第三部分：表达旅行感受。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．n．旅程；旅行2．adj.商业区的；市中心的3．n.纪念品4．adj.疲惫不堪的5．下(车、船等)6．上(车、船等)journeydowntownsouvenirexhaustedgetoffgetonⅡ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．上周，我和父母参加了上海三日游活动。Lastweek,myparentsandI．2．午饭后，我们去了外滩，在那里我们对各种各样的建筑印象深刻。Afterlunch,wewenttotheBund,andtherewe_____________________．wereimpressedmadeathreedayjourneyofShanghaiwithavarietyofbuildings3．第二天，我们参观了迪士尼乐园，并参加了许多活动。Thenextday,wevisitedShanghaiDisneylandand___________________________．4．尽管我们疲惫不堪，但是非常高兴。__________________________,wefeltveryglad.5．多棒的旅行！_______________________itwas!6．它不仅让我快乐，而且拓展了我的视野。_____________________,butitalsobroadenedmyhorizon.ItnotonlyentertainedmeparticipatedinmanyactivitiesAlthoughwewereexhaustedWhatawonderfuljourney(二)句式升级7．用where引导的非限制性定语从句改写句2_____________________________________________________________________________.8．用分词短语作状语改写句3_______________________________________________________________.Thenextday,wevisitedShanghaiDisneylandparticipatinginmanyAfterlunch,wewenttotheBund,wherewewereimpressedwithavarietyofbuildingsactivities[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】Lastweek,myparentsandImadeathreedayjourneyofShanghai.Assoonaswegotofftheplane,wegotonthebusandheadedstraightfortheOrientalPearlTower.Afterlunch,wewenttotheBund,wherewewereimpressedwithavarietyofbuildings.Aftersupper,weadmiredthefascinatingnightscenesofHuangpuRiverfromacruiseship.Thenextday,wevisitedShanghaiDisneylandparticipatinginmanyactivities.Onthethirdday,wewentonasightseeingtourofthedowntownstreetsandboughtsomesouvenirgifts.Althoughwewereexhausted,wefeltveryglad.Whatawonderfuljourneyitwas!Itnotonlyentertainedme,butitalsobroadenedmyhorizon.