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[写作任务]假定你是李华，来自美国的笔友Peter给你写了一封电子邮件。请根据邮件内容给他写一封回信，表明你的观点并说明理由。DearLiHua，Longtimenoseeyou.Howareyou?Anewlawhasbeenpassedinmycity.Smokinghasbeenbannedinallpublicplaces.Ithinkitisawisedecision.Doyouthinkso?Yours，Peter注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter，I'mpleasedtoreceiveyouremail._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes，LiHua[写作指导]一、审题定调该写作要求考生回复一封电子邮件，表达对公共场合实施禁烟令的看法。电子邮件主要由称呼、正文和落款构成。本写作开头和落款已给出，故考生只需写正文部分。二、谋篇布局根据所给提示，我们可以将正文分为三部分：第一部分：表明观点(赞成公共场合禁烟方案)；第二部分：说明理由(易导致疾病、影响他人健康、污染空气、易引发火灾)；第三部分：总结全文(避免在公共场合吸烟)。常用表达I'mmorethanpleasedtohavereceivedyourletter.Ilearnedfromyourletterthat...Knowingthatyouareinterestedin...，I'mwritingtosharemyopinionswithyou.Inyourletteryouaskedmewhy...Differentpeoplehold/havedifferentopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards......ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat...Somepeoplebelievethat...;othersarguethat...About20%ofthestudentssurveyedsaid...AsfarasIamconcerned,weshould...Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,pleasedon'thesitatetocontactme.Youcancallmeat...oremailme.三、组织语言第一部分：表明观点(赞成公共场合禁烟方案)。普通表达高级表达·Istronglysupportthegovernment'sdecisiontobansmokinginpublic.·Asforbanningsmokinginpublic,Iapproveof(赞成)thelaw.·Regardingsmokinginpublic,Iamstronglyinfavorofbanningit.第二部分：说明理由(易导致疾病、影响他人健康、污染空气、易引发火灾)。普通表达高级表达·Smokingisabadhabitandveryharmfultopeople'shealth.·Itmakesiteasierforsmokerstogetvariousdiseases.·Atthesametime,secondhandsmokecanalsobadlyaffectotherpeople'shealth,especiallybabies'.·Cigarettesmokecanpollutetheairinsideabuildingandstaythereforalongtime,whichstopspeoplefrombreathingfreely.·Smokingmayalsocauseafireandresultingreatloss.·Smokingisadangeroushabitthatdoesharmtonotonlythesmoker,butalsothosearoundhimorher.·Itincreasesthepossibility/chancesofgettingdeadlydiseases.·Itcouldputyouindangerof/atriskofgettingvariousdeadlydiseases.·Secondhandsmokecanleadtoseriousdamagetononsmokers.·Cigarettesmokecanstayforalongtimeinabuilding,makingithardforpeopletheretobreathe.·Smokingmayleadtoafireandbringaboutgreatloss.第三部分：总结全文(避免在公共场合吸烟)。普通表达高级表达Weshouldavoidsmokinginpublicandcreateagreenenvironmenttogether.Everyoneshouldcontrolthedesire(欲望)tosmokeinpublicforthegoodofallpeople'shealthandourenvironment.【范文展示】普通范文DearPeter，I'mpleasedtoreceiveyouremail.Istronglysupportthegovernment'sdecisiontobansmokinginpublic.Smokingisabadhabitandveryharmfultopeople'shealth.Itmakesiteasierforsmokerstogetvariousdiseases.Atthesametime,secondhandsmokecanalsobadlyaffectotherpeople'shealth,especiallybabies'.Cigarettesmokecanpollutetheairinsideabuildingandstaythereforalongtime,whichstopspeoplefrombreathingfreely.What'smore,smokingmaycauseafireandresultingreatloss.Inaword,weshouldavoidsmokinginpublicandcreateagreenenvironmenttogether.Bestwishes，LiHua高级范文DearPeter，I'mpleasedtoreceiveyouremail.Asforbanningsmokinginpublic,Iapproveofthelaw.Smokingisadangeroushabitthatdoesharmtonotonlythesmoker,butalsothosearoundhimorher.Itincreasesthechancesofgettingdeadlydiseases.Meanwhile,secondhandsmokecanleadtoseriousdamagetononsmokers.Cigarettesmokecanstayforalongtimeinabuilding,makingithardforpeopletheretobreathe.What'sworse,smokingmayleadtoafireandbringaboutgreatloss.Inanutshell,everyoneshouldcontrolthedesiretosmokeinpublicforthegoodofallpeople'shealthandourenvironment.Bestwishes,LiHua实战演练假定你是李华，以下是你的外国笔友David发给你的电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容给他回一封电子邮件。DearLiHua，Longtimenoseeyou.Howareyou?Lastmonth,myroommateofferedmeacigarette.FirstIrefusedbutintheendIcouldn'tcontrolmyselfandsmokedit.Itmademefeelrelaxed.NowIsmokefivetosixcigarettesaday.ItseemsthatI'vebecomeaddictedtotobacco.WhatshouldIdo?Yours，David注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearDavid，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearDavid，I'msosorrytolearnthatyouhavebeguntosmoke.Ihopeyoucangiveitup.First,it'sgenerallyknownthatsmokingisabadhabit.Itnotonlymakesothersuncomfortable,butalsoputspeoplearoundyouingreatdangerofdeadlydiseases.Moreimportantly,smokinghasabadeffectonyourhealth.Itcanmakeyousoaddictedthatyoucannotlivewithouttobacco.Inotherwords,smokingisdamagingyourhealth.Hopefully,youcantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandbreakawayfromthisbadhabit.Yours，LiHua