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Module2MyNewTeachersSectionⅤWriting——描写人物写作技法指导[文体指导]本模块的主要写作话题是你最喜欢的老师。这类作文一般分为三部分。开头部分：点出文章主题，对人物进行简单概述；主体部分：根据写作要求，详细介绍所描述人物的特点；结尾部分：概括人们的评价。[亮点句式]1．段首常用语：(1)Mr.Wu,ourphysicsteacher,isexcellent.Heenjoysteachingphysics.(2)Mrs.Zhang,ourhistoryteacher,isgoodatteaching.(3)WealllikeMrs.Wang,ourmathsteacher.2．对优秀老师的特点的描述：(1)Heisverypatientandhasawaytomaketheclassinteresting.(2)Shemakesthingsinterestingandexcitingtolearn.(3)Shevariesherlessonstomakethemmoreinteresting.(4)Ifyousucceedinworkingoutaproblem,shewillpraiseyouinclass.(5)Shemakesusbelievewecanlearnmathswell.(6)Wehavevariousafterclassactivities,suchassinging,Englishcorner,andhavingtalksanddiscussionsonoursubjects.(7)Buthisbestqualityisthathelikesallhisstudents.满分佳作构建[写作任务]最近来自加拿大的外教史密斯先生担任你们班的口语老师。请你根据提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍这位新老师。外貌戴眼镜；年轻、英俊；中等身材性格对人有耐心；乐于助人教学方面知识丰富；课堂生动有趣与学生的关系与学生关系融洽；在学习方面要求严格参考词汇：中等身材beofmediumheight要求：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数100个左右。[审题谋篇]体裁记叙文时态一般现在时主题介绍老师人称第三人称和第一人称结构第一部分：外貌和性格特点第二部分：师生关系第三部分：教学风格[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．v．&n.尊敬；尊重2．adj.耐心的3．adj.严格的；严厉的4．_________________在……方面有麻烦5．_________________取得进步respectpatientstricthaveproblemswithmakeprogressⅡ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．他是一个帅气的戴着眼镜的年轻老师，中等身材。Heisandisofmediumheight.2．他对我们很耐心，而且乐于助人，因此我们学生都喜欢他。He,soheisverypopularwithusstudents.isverypatientwithusandalwaysreadytohelpothersahandsomeyoungteacherwithglasses3．每当我们在学习和生活上有麻烦，我们喜欢向他求助。___________________________________________,we'dlovetoturntohimforhelp.4．我们大家都喜欢他的课，因为他知识丰富，能够使他的课生动有趣。Allofuslikehislessonsbecause______________________________________________________________．hehasmuchknowledgeandcanWheneverwehaveproblemswithourstudyorlifemakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting5．尽管他容易相处，但他对我们很严格。_______________________________,heisstrictwithus.6．我们相信，在史密斯先生的帮助下，我们一定能取得很大的进步。WebelievethatwiththehelpofMr.Smith,we______________________________．aresuretomakeAlthoughheiseasytogetalongwithgreatprogress(二)句式升级7．用that'sbecause...改写句2__________________________________________________________________________________________________.8．用with复合结构改写句6_______________________________________________________________.WebelievethatwithMr.Smithhelpingus,wearesuretomakegreatHeisverypopularwithusstudents,andthat'sbecauseheisverypatientwithusandalwaysreadytohelpothersprogress[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】Ournewteacher,Mr.Smith,comesfromCanada.Heisahandsomeyoungteacherwithglassesandisofmediumheight.Heisverypopularwithusstudents,andthat'sbecauseheisverypatientwithusandalwaysreadytohelpothers.Wheneverwehaveproblemswithourstudyorlife,we'dlovetoturntohimforhelp.Allofuslikehislessonsbecausehehasmuchknowledgeandcanmakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Althoughheiseasytogetalongwith,heisstrictwithus.WebelievethatwithMr.Smithhelpingus,wearesuretomakegreatprogress.