幻想故事写作[感悟范文]最近,某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛,请你根据所给出的故事的开头,续写一篇幻想小故事参赛。Ayoungmanwaswalkingthroughawoodwhenhesawashiningringlyingontheground.Hejuststoodandwonderedandthentheringsaid,“Youngman,akindgirlistrappedbyawitchinthecastleahead.Ifyouarebraveenoughtorescueher,youwillgainhappiness.PutmeonandIwillhelpyou.”...注意:词数120左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]Ayoungmanwaswalkingthroughawoodwhenhesawashiningringlyingontheground.Hejuststoodandwonderedandthentheringsaid,“Youngman,akindgirlistrappedbyawitchinthecastleahead.Ifyouarebraveenoughtorescueher,youwillgainhappiness.PutmeonandIwillhelpyou.”答案①Theyoungmandidn'thesitateandputtheringonhisfinger.②Muchtohissurprise,hediscoveredthathedisappearedandwasinvisibletoanyotherpeople.③Onlywhenhetookitoffcouldpeopleseehim.④Hefeltmoreconfidentandheadedforthecastle.⑤Onapproachingthecastle,heputtheringonandenteredthecastle.⑥Heeventuallyfoundthecryinggirl,onwhomthewitchhadputaspell,learningthatthegirlcouldn'tmoveunlesssomeonedestroyedthewitch'smagicalclub,removingthespell.⑦Havinglearnedaboutthis,theyoungmanputtheringon,lookingaroundforthewitch'smagicalclub.⑧Finally,hefounditinagoldenbox;hedestroyedit,removingthespellonthegirlandsavingthegirl.⑨Theyoungman,togetherwiththegirl,defeatedthewitch.答案⑩Thegirlsavedbytheyoungmanturnedouttobeaprincess,andthekingmarriedherofftotheyoungman,theyoungmanandtheprincesslivingahappylife.亮点分析:1.文中only位于句首的倒装句,ondoingsth.结构以及独立主格结构的使用,使文章内容表述清晰,句子结构更加复杂高级。2.文中非限制性定语从句和现在分词短语的使用,丰富了所在句子的相关信息,使句子更有层次感。答案[技法讨论]本模块要求写一篇幻想故事,幻想故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性,在体裁上属于记叙文,情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。虚幻故事的写作步骤:1.仔细审题,确定文章结构虚幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分:第一部分为故事的开始,第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果,最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。2.根据需要确定时态虚幻故事通常是发生在过去,因此应以一般过去时为主。3.筛选词汇虚幻故事一般为虚构的故事,要求语言比较夸张。为了吸引读者,故事的语言要生动,富于虚幻性。[类文演练]假设你要给参观你校的外籍人员,讲解中国的传统文化。一名外国朋友对中国成语“自相矛盾”发生了兴趣。请你根据图片,把这个古代的寓言故事讲给他们听。词数130左右。参考词汇:矛spear;盾shield;刺pierce[联想词汇]1.__________________自相矛盾的答案:selfcontradictory答案2.________adj.锋利的答案:sharp答案3.________v.吹嘘,夸大答案:boast答案4.__________________在古代中国答案:inancientChina答案5.__________________众所周知答案:beknowntoall答案[单句写作]1.中国成语“自相矛盾”众所周知。________________“ZiXiangMaoDun”is________all.答案:TheChineseidiom;knownto答案2.世界上没有东西能刺穿他们。__________________canpiercethem.答案:Nothingintheworld答案3.世上没有完美的东西。________________________intheworld.答案:Therearenotperfectthings答案[连句成章]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]TheChineseidiom“ZiXiangMaoDun”isknowntoall,whichisusedtolaughatsomeonewhosewordsorbehaviorsareselfcontradictory.IttellsusastorythathappensintheStateofChuinancientChina.Weseeamansellingspearsandshieldsinthemarketplaceinthecenterofthepicture.Alotofpeoplegatheraroundhim.“Myspearsarethesharpest,”heboasts,“thatthereisnothingtheycannotpierce.Myshieldsarealsothestrongest,sonothingintheworldcanpiercethem.”Oneofthepeopleinthecrowdthenlaughs,“Sowhatifthespearpiercestheshield?”答案Themancannotansweraword.Fromthestorywecanknowthattherearenotperfectthingsintheworld.Weshouldn'tsayanythingintheworldisgoodtothelimit.答案课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练对应学生用书P034阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Thesedays,modernbuildingsareeverywhere.Butifyouwanttosee__1__lifewasbackintheolddays,Chinastillhasmanybeautifulwater__2__(town)tovisit.CNNhaschosenfourofthecountry'smostbeautifulones.ThevillageofZhouzhuanginJiangsucalls__3__(it)“theoldestwatertowninChina”.Thevillage,which__4__(build)in1086,iscrossedwithcanals.Takingaboatridethroughtown,theredlanternsmightmakeyouthinkofChina'sromanticpast.Hongcun,__5__(fill)withlakesandbeautifulAnhuistylebuildings,is900yearsold.Itwasbuilttolooklikeabigox.HuangshanMountainisthehead;thetownisthebodyandthebridgesarelegs.FenghuanginHunandoesn'tlooklikeabird,__6__itsnamemeans“phoenix(凤凰)”inChinese.Thetownisasbeautifulasthe__7__(magic)bird.Thestilted(吊脚的)buildingsoneachsideoftheTuojiangRivermakethearealooklikeascenefrom__8__postcard.Whilemostwatertownsareinthesouth,Shandong'sTai'erzhuangstandsoutinthenorth.Thetown__9__(be)onthebankoftheBeijingHangzhouGrandCanal.Inthetown,thereareancientbridges,acanalandtemples,__10__(make)youthinkofitspastglory.1.________2.________3.________4.________5.________6.________7.________8.________9.________10.________答案:1.how2.towns3.itself4.wasbuilt5.filled6.but7.magical8.a9.is10.making答案