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回复电子邮件[感悟范文]假定你是中学生李华，在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长写一篇电子邮件。I'mthemotherofafourteenyearoldgirl.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomefriendsofminekeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3.提出至少两条建议。注意：词数不少于120。参考词汇：评价evaluate__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]Hi,TigerMom，WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.①Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.②Althoughhighgradesplayanimportantpartinevaluatingstudentsandtheirfutureuniversityadmission,yetdevelopmentinemotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.③Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.④SomeallAstudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobesosuccessfulinsocietyasexpected.⑤Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.⑥Inaddition,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.答案⑦SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.⑧Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl;letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivitiesasweteenagersoftendo.⑨Ihopeyouwillchangeyourmindandthingswillgosmoothly.Yours，LiHua答案亮点分析：1．文中使用了that引导的表语从句，且从句中运用it作形式主语。2．文中使用了让步状语从句，而且短语playanimportantpartin和词汇ignore的使用也很恰当。3．so...as结构的运用使得句子更加复杂得体。4．句式“Thereasonisthat...”阐明了讲述的现象的原因。5．连接副词inaddition和短语bynomeans的使用使作者的理由更加有力。6．文中两个祈使句的使用更能触动TigerMom。[技法讨论]本模块要求回复一封电子邮件，回复电子邮件是书信的一种格式，其目的是解答有关组织或个人提出或出现的问题。其他像回帖、对于博客内容的回复，版主对于留言的回复，本质上类似于回复电子邮件，高考也经常会考到。电子邮件的写作步骤：1．要有一个说明性的、合适的主题。其目的在于让收信者快速地了解电子邮件的主要内容。如：LifeinBritain/CongratulationsfromWangHai等。2．电子邮件正文的开头部分必须呈现邮件的要点，然后再详细介绍一些辅助性的内容。作者必须根据被说明对象的特征，有序地列出写作提纲。3．要用简练的语言。电子邮件的语言主要讲究简洁、真实、准确，如maybe,possible,mostof等不确定的表达方法是不宜多用的，但可用一些具体的数目作辅助说明。特别是在一些商务性的电子邮件中，语言的正确性尤其重要。[类文演练]假设你叫张明，你的美国网友Jane想了解你对上网的看法。请根据下面提供的信息，用英语给Jane发一封100词左右的电子邮件。1.能获得更多的信息，可上网学习，使联系更加方便。2.可以聊天、玩游戏，但很浪费时间，网上有有害的内容。3.建议要学会利用网络学习，时间应有限制。[联想词汇]1．________________上网答案：ontheInternet答案2．________________最新信息答案：thelatestinformation答案3．________________保持联系答案：keepintouch答案4．________________发送和接收电子邮件答案：sendandreceiveemails答案[单句写作]1．通过网络他们能得大量新信息。Theycangetagreatdealof____________________________________.答案：thelatestinformationthroughtheInternet答案2．跟朋友保持联系更加方便容易。________easyandconvenient____________________.答案：Itis;tokeepintouchwithfriends答案3．一些学生花太多时间上网聊天玩游戏。Somestudentshavespenttoomuchtime________and______________.答案：chatting;playinggamesontheInternet答案[连句成章]__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]DearJane，IwouldliketogiveyoumyopinionaboutbeingontheInternet.MoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsherearestartingusingtheInternet,throughwhichtheycangetagreatdealofthelatestinformation.Theycanenjoylessonsgivenbythebestteachersofnetschoolsathome.Anditiseasyandconvenienttokeepintouchwithfriendsbysendingandreceivingemails.答案Ontheotherhand,somestudentshavespenttoomuchtimechattingandplayinggamesontheInternet.Andthereissomethingharmfultothestudents.SoIsuggestthatstudentsshouldmakegooduseoftheInternetfortheirstudiesandnotbeonlinefortoolongeachtime.Yours，ZhangMing答案课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Sincechildhood,I__1__(see)actionmoviesstarringBruceLeeandJackieChan,andIwasalwayscurioustolearnthemartialarts(武术).__2__thereisChina,thereiskungfu.OnceIarrivedinChina,mydreamwas__3__(learn)T'aiChiandkungfuandmasterthetechniquesofmartialarts.Aftermyarrivaloncampusonthefirstday,Iwentforawalkintheearlymorning.Isawsomeolderpeople__4__(practise)T'aiChislowly.Istoppedandwatchedtheirmovementsclosely.Itattractedme,andtheverynextdayatregistrationtime,Irushedtotheteacher'sofficetochooseT'aiChiasmy__5__(option)course.ThefollowingweekIwasonthegroundsearlyinthemorningwithmyclassmates.TheteachertoldusthatT'aiChi__6__(favor)foritshealthbenefits.Themovementofthebodyisrelated__7__theyinandyangforces.Themain__8__(rule)thattheteachertaughtuswereattitude,discipline(自律)andbalance.Iwastakingeverybitofthetraining__9__(serious)andtryingtomaintainmybalance,whichwasadifficultjob.However,astheteacherputs__10__，ourattitude,ourwillingnessandouractionwillmaketheimpossiblepossible.AndIwilldo.1．________2.________3.________4.________5．________6.________7.________8.________9．________10.________答案：1.haveseen2.Where3.tolearn4.practising5．optional6.isfavored7.to8.rules9.seriously10.it答案