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SectionⅤWritingModule1SmallTalk建议类的电子邮件文体感知建议类的电子邮件就是在邮件中向收件人提出建议和忠告。1．先要明确写给谁。写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的建议和看法。写给某个组织机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议和忠告。2．正文：(1)发邮件的原因和背景；(2)建议的内容及提出建议的理由；(3)对收件人的祝福和祝愿。3．要用简练的语言。电子邮件要写得简明扼要，具有合理性和说服力，同时注意说话的语气要委婉。增分佳句1．建议信开头常用句式：Iwassopleasedtohearfromyou,andIamwritingtogiveyousometipson...2．表达建议常用句式：(1)Inreplytoyourletterabout...,letmetellyouaboutthat.(2)Secondly,itisnecessary/unnecessaryforyouto...(3)Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetter...(4)Itshouldbeagoodideato...(5)AsfarasIamconcerned,you’dbetter...(6)What’smore,itwillbehelpfultoyouthat...(7)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(8)You’dbettertakesomemeasurestodo...(9)It’ssuggestedthat...(10)WhatIwanttostressisthat...3．建议信结尾常用句式：(1)Waitingforyourgoodnews.(2)Goodluckwithyour...(3)I’mexpectingtohearfromyouassoonaspossible.写作模板Dear，IhavereceivedyouremailandIunderstandyourproblem.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto，andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestionshere.(引出主题)Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:．(建议的内容)Firstly,itisveryimportantto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.I’msure．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Inconclusion,Iwishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.I’mlookingforwardto．(表达愿望)Yourssincerely，×××写作要求假如你是李华，四月十五日收到你朋友张明的电子邮件，说他准备在暑假期间乘火车来北京度假，希望你去车站接他。现在请你根据以下要点给张明回个电子邮件：1．欢迎来北京度假；2．假期票难买，请提前买票；3．北京有很多游览点，还可以参观北京大学；4．请电话告知车次及起程日期(dateofdeparture)，准备去车站迎接。注意：词数100左右。DearZhangMing，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua审题谋篇体裁应用文时态一般现在时主题对朋友来北京度假的电子邮件的回复人称第二人称和第一人称结构第一部分：欢迎来北京度假，并提醒提前买票；第二部分：介绍北京的旅游点；第三部分：要求告知车次及起程日期，以便去车站迎接词汇推敲1._______________机会2._______________无论如何3._______________预先4._______________另外5._______________带领某人参观opportunityanyhowinadvanceinadditionshowsb.around遣词造句1．完成句子①非常高兴收到你的四月十五日的邮件。______________________youremailonApril15.②由于假期票很难买，你最好提前买票。Astickets___________________duringtheholiday,you’dbetterbuyyourticketinadvance.③北京是一座漂亮的城市，有很多游览地，例如颐和园和长城。Beijingisabeautifulcity_______________________________________，suchastheSummerPalaceandtheGreatWall.It’sgreattoreceivearedifficulttobuywheretherearemanyplacesforsightseeing④另外，你可以参观北京大学，它是我们国家最著名的大学之一。Inaddition,youcanvisitthePekingUniversity,_______________________________________________inourcountry.⑤利用这个好机会，你将会非常愉快。_____________________________________________youwillhaveawonderfultime.⑥请电话告知我何时到达，什么车次。Pleasetellmeoverthephone_______________aswellasthetrainnumber.whichisoneTakeadvantageofthegoodopportunity,andwhentoarriveofthemostfamousuniversities2．句式升级⑦it作形式主语升级句②的从句，suggestthat升级句②的主句As_____________________________duringtheholiday,I____________________________________________inadvance.⑧用名词短语作同位语升级句④Inaddition,youcanvisitthePekingUniversity,___________________________________________．⑨用含有if引导的状语从句的复合句升级句⑤_______________________________________________,youwillhaveawonderfultime.it’sdifficulttobuyticketssuggestthatyoushouldbuyyourticketoneofthemostIfyoutakeadvantageofthegoodopportunityfamousuniversitiesinourcountry妙笔成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearZhangMing,It’sgreattoreceiveyouremailonApril15.WelcometoBeijingtostaywithmeduringthesummerholiday.Asit’sdifficulttobuyticketsduringtheholiday,Isuggestthatyoushouldbuyyourticketinadvance.Beijingisabeautifulcitywheretherearemanyplacesforsightseeing,suchastheSummerPalaceandtheGreatWall.Inaddition,youcanvisitthePekingUniversity,oneofthemostfamousuniversitiesinourcountry.Anyhow,Iwillshowyouaroundifyouliketovisittheseplaces.Ifyoutakeadvantageofthegoodopportunity,youwillhaveawonderfultime.Pleasetellmeoverthephonewhentoarriveaswellasthetrainnumber.Iwillmeetyouatthestation.Yourssincerely,LiHua(2019·昆明高二期中)假如你叫李明，有一位来自英国的朋友Mike。他与父母一道来到了中国。初来乍到，他发现自己在家时所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件。邮件的内容包含如下要点：1．邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题；2．提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，应尽可能用汉语与同学交流，不要担心犯错误；在家看电视时，多注意节目主持人(presenter)的发音，以便提高听力水平；3．祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：1．内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数：100左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearMike，IhavereceivedyouremailandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,speakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakesbecausemakingmistakesisquitenatural.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,inordertoimproveyourlistening,youshouldpaymoreattentiontoTVpresenters’pronunciationwhenwatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresswithtimegoingon.Inconclusion,Iwishyoueverysuccesswithyou