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Module1OurBodyandHealthyHabitsSectionⅤWriting——关于健康问题的说明文写作技法指导[文体指导]写有关健康问题的说明文时，一般要写明什么样的做法会对健康有利或有害，人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。该类文章一般分为三部分：1．开门见山提出主题，说明自己所发现的关于健康问题的现象；2．分析所给内容，然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容时可以先说现象，也可以先说结果，再说引起这种结果的原因；3．最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一部分的内容主要是提出解决办法及给出自己的保持健康的建议。[亮点句式]1．AsfarasIamconcerned,healthismoreimportantthanwealth.2．Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.3．Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesapersonhealthy,wealthyandwise.4．Itiswidelybelievedthatplentyoffreshaircontributestogoodhealth.5．Nowadayspeoplearebeginningtopaymoreattentiontotheirhealththaneverbefore.6．Weshouldrejectjunkfood,suchasinstantnoodlesandhamburgers.7．Doctorsadviseusteenagerstosleepatleast8hourseachday.8．Peoplecometorealizethatgoodhealthisthemostvaluablethingapersoncanhave.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你们学校英文报就“良好饮食习惯”这一主题征文。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。部分同学的不良饮食习惯1.不吃早餐2.爱吃零食3.偏食4.饮食过量良好的饮食习惯1.选择不同的健康食品，如水果，蔬菜等2.规律饮食个人的看法1.良好饮食习惯的重要性2．如何做？[审题谋篇]体裁说明文时态一般现在时主题健康饮食人称第一人称结构第一部分：引出话题第二部分：不良饮食习惯第三部分：良好的饮食习惯和个人观点[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．____n．饮食2．_________adj.不健康的；有碍健康的3．___adj.健康的；强健的4．_________n.生活方式5．_________________与……有联系dietunhealthyfitlifestylebeconnectedwithⅡ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．众所周知，健康与我们吃的东西密切相关。Asweallknow,health_________________________whatweeat.2．因此，我们有一个平衡的饮食非常重要。Therefore,itisimportantforus_______________________．iscloselyconnectedwithtohaveabalanceddiet3．我们应该食用各种各样的食物，像鱼、肉、蔬菜、水果和米饭、面条。Weshouldhave_______________________likefish,meat,vegetables,fruitaswellasrice,noodles.4．我们应该有规律地适当进食。Weshouldhavethefood______________________．differentkindsoffoodregularlyandproperly5．我认为保持健康的饮食很重要。Ithinkitisimportant______________________．6．这对强健体魄很有帮助。Thisisbeneficial_________________________．tokeepahealthydiettobuildupastrongbody(二)句式升级7．用notonly...butalso...合并3和4句_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并5和6句______________________________________________________________________________________________________Weshouldnotonlyhavedifferentkindsoffood,likefish,meat,vegetables,fruitsaswellasrice,noodles,butalsohavethefoodregularlyandproperly.Ithinkitisimportanttokeepahealthydiet,whichisbeneficialtobuildupastrongbody.[妙笔成篇]_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowtoGetintoGoodEatingHabitAsweallknow，healthisclosedlyconnectedwithwhatweeat.Therefore,it'simportantforustohaveabalanceddiet.However,somestudentshaveformedavarietyofunhealthyeatinghabits,suchasnothavingbreakfast,eatingsnacks,beingparticularaboutfood,eatinganddrinkingtoomuchandsoon,whichwillsurelydoharmtotheirhealth.Tokeepfit,weshouldhaveahealthydiet.Weshouldnotonlyhavedifferentkindsoffood,likefish,meat,vegetables,fruitaswellasrice,noodles,butalsohavethefoodregularlyandproperly.Personally,Ithinkitisimportanttokeepahealthydiet,whichisbeneficialtobuildupastrongbody.