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写作专题讲析第六讲完美衔接过渡，编织流畅作文明确了文章的主题和中心后，我们就应该用适当的连词、恰当的短语、合适的句型将要点扩展成句，进而导向文章。高考书面表达评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”，并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑”。此处所说的连贯性，是指段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，做到在文意与结构上层次分明，条理清楚，连贯流畅。因此，为了增加文章的连贯性、逻辑性和可读性，大家在写作时要根据行文的需要，恰当使用各类过渡词、过渡句甚至过渡段来实现词与词、句与句、段与段之间的有效连接。具体使用时，请注意下面两点：一、使用过渡性词语1．表递进关系的过渡词besides，inaddition，moreover，what'smore，what'sworse等。2．表转折对比的过渡词but，however，yet，instead，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，despite，inspiteof，whereas，nevertheless等。3．表结果的过渡词so，thus，therefore，asaresult，sothat等。4．表换一种方式表达的过渡词inotherwords，thatistosay，toputitanotherway等。5．表达普遍规律generallyspeaking，ingeneral，allinall等。6．表总结的过渡词inaword，inshort，tosumup，finally，inconclusion，insummary等。7．表特定的顺序关系的过渡词first，firstly，second，secondly，third，thirdly，aboveall，firstofall，then，next，finally，intheend，atlast，eventually等。二、使用过渡性句子段与段之间除了借助于一些篇章层次上的连接性词语，如however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，similarly，therefore，inconclusion，inshort等以外，还经常需要使用一些表示过渡的句子来确保其连贯性。常见的过渡性句子类型有：1．设问引出下文为了引出下文所要表达的内容，作者有时采用设问的方式引出下文。2．总体陈述不同观点有时作者在前一个段落列举各种现象或者引出某个要供大家讨论的话题，接下来就要从整体上论述人们对此持有的不同看法，然后再具体论述各种观点，如Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.等。3．举实例佐证有时为了增强某个观点或者现象的说服力，我们可以使用实例加以佐证。可以使用forexample/instance，suchas，asfollows等来引出下文。常用的过渡句式(黑体部分)：Also，doletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Obviously，agoodlearninghabitcanhelpustospeeduptoreachourdestinations.What'smore，goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.Ilostmywayintheforestandtomakemattersworse/whatisworse，itbecamedark.Inaddition，weshouldn'tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime，Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.TakeBeijingforexample，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon'tcherishwildlife.AsfarasIamconcerned，theystandforlove，friendshipandunity.Besides，Iwishtherewouldn'tbetoomanystudentsinaclass.Moreover，itseemsthathealwaysthinksmoreofhimselfthanofothers.Worsestill，Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Second，gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideringmyparents.However，notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.Ontheotherhand，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Onthecontrary，thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.ContrarytowhatIhadoriginallysaid，thetripturnedouttobefun.However，whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction.Otherwisewe'llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.Butnowbecausemyleftfootwasinjured，Icannotgowithyouasplanned.学即练Ⅰ.根据句意填入适当的过渡词或短语1．Forthem，theimprovementofstudentsisthebestreward.________，Iwanttosay“HappyTeachers'Day”sincerelytoteachers.2．Insummerdays，theweatheristoohottostand.________studentshavetostayoutsidealltheday.________thetrainingisveryhard.3．________，heunderstoodwhatIsaid.4．Comparedwiththewestern，theChinesechildrenareshyerincommunication.________，astheonlychildinthefamily，theycan'tenjoythehappinessfrombrotherorsister.5．Inthisaspect，workingisnotonlyawaytomakealiving，butalsoawayforustoachieveourselves.________，workingcanbringsatisfactiontousinspirit.6．Theboywasn'tallowedtoenterschool.________，hewastooyoungtogotoschool.7．________，thecoldestweathercomesinJanuary.8．Wedislikepeople________him.9．Idon'tdislikehimatall；________Iamveryfondofhim.10．Myaimwas________todeterminewhatIshoulddonext.答案：1.Therefore2.But；Inaddition3.Asaresult4．Ontheotherhand5.Inotherwords6.That'stosay7．Generallyspeaking8.suchas9.onthecontrary10．firstofallⅡ.阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空as，thus，though，afterall，ontheonehand...ontheotherhandDearSam，Thankyouforyourconcern.I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutthecollegeentranceexamination，whichyouwonderedinyourletter.1．________isknowninChina，theexamwith4subjectsaltogetherisheldonJune7thand8th.I，togetherwiththousandsofotherstudents，havepreparedforitforatleast3years.2.________，IhavestrongbeliefthatIwilldowellintheexam；3.________，Ifeelabitnervous,4.________it'snotdifficult.5.________，itdependsonthegradeswhetherIcangotocollege.6.________，it'sofgreatimportancetome.7．________thesayinggoes，“Nopains，nogains.”Iwilltrymybesttogainagoodresult.Bestwishes!Yours，LiXia答案：1.As2.Ontheonehand3.ontheotherhand4．though5.Afterall6.Thus7.As