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第六讲书面表达第一节常用应用文写作五、建议信母题探究栏目导航题组集训【写作方法】1．首段：说明写信的目的，注意语气。2．主体：提出具体建议，首先肯定优点，再写需改进的地方和建议；3．尾段：希望考虑建议，并有所帮助。【必备模板】Dear________，I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_____________(引出对方需要建议的主题)．Hereareafewsuggestions(引出作者的建议).First,itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)Asto__________________，Isuggest_______________(需要具体到某一方面).Inaddition,__________________(其他的建议).I'msure___________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行为的信心和决心)．Ihope____________________(表达愿望)．Yourssincerely，LiHua【必备佳句】1．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/giveyouahand.在读了你的信后，我知道你在……上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。2．You'veaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding…andI'lltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.关于……你向我征求建议，在此，我尽力提出一些有用的建议。3．Whenitcomesto/Asfor…Iwouldliketosuggest/recommend…当涉及/关于……我想建议……4．Thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.我的建议如下。5．Inmyopinion/Personally/AsfarasI'mconcerned，itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。6．Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful./Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefittoyou.我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。7．Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsiderationseriously.我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。8．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。看到你在这方面取得进步我非常高兴。(2017·高考北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1．你建议的线路；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于100；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua本文是一封建议信。写一封回信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构：三段式。其中第一段写你所建议的路线；第二段阐述你建议该路线的原因；最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系。同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【范文赏析】DearJim,I'mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,①botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,②IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRiver,andthereasonsareasfollowings.Firstly,theYangtzeRiverisoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization,③fromwhichyoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Secondly,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,④withmanywellknownsightseeingspots.⑤That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours，LiHuaA(2019·安徽省安庆一中三模英语)假设你是李华，得知你的英国好友Tom通过了来华从教的申请，将于今年七月到你校教学。请根据下面的提示给他写封电子邮件：1．表示祝贺；2．告知可能遇到的挑战并给出建议。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearTom，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】Dear_Tom，Knowingthatyourapplicationtobeourforeignteacherhasbeenapproved,Iamwritingtoexpresssincerecongratulationstoyou.IamreallydelightedthatyouwillcometoChinathisJuly.SinceitisyourfirstvisittoChina,I'dliketooffersomesuggestions.Tobeginwith,thelocaldietisquitedifferentfromyours,whichmaytakealittletimetoadapttophysicallyandmentally.What'smore,studentsherearefriendlybutshy,reluctanttocommunicatewithstrangers.Thereforeitwouldbeagoodideaifyoucouldbeginwithsomethingeasyandinterestingtobuilduptheirconfidence.Inaddition,don'tforgettolearnaboutlocalcustomsandmannersinadvance,whichwilldefinitelyhelpyoufitinwithnewsurroundings.Ihopethatmysuggestionscanbeofbenefittoyou.Lookingforwardtomeetingyousoon.Yours，Li_HuaB假定你是李华，你校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPadclassrooms)。你支持开设iPad课堂；请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：(1)资源丰富；(2)促进交流；(3)利于环保；(4)其他理由。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearHeadmaster，WehavebeenaskedaboutouropinionsonopeningiPadclassrooms.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【参考范文】Dear_Headmaster，We_have_been_asked_about_our_opinions_on_opening_iPad_classrooms.Iaminfavorofthisplanforthefollowingreasons.Tobeginwith,everyonelearnsdifferently.StudentscancustomizetheiriPadwithmaterialsthatfittheirlevelandlearningstyle,andthustailorittodifferentneeds.Moreover,whenconnectedtotheInternet,studentscaninteractwithteachersandclassmatesaboutwhattheylearnmoreconveniently.Forthesakeofenvironmentalprotection,openingiPadclassroomsisagoodwaytosavetreesthatwehavebeencuttingdownforpaper.Mostimportantly,Ibelievestudentswilldeveloptheirinterestsinthesubjectsbyenjoyinganewwayoflearning.IhopeyouwouldtakemyideasintoconsiderationandwelookforwardtoattendinganiPadclass.Yours_sincerely，Li_Hua