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Unit5TravellingabroadSectionⅤWriting——给笔友写一封信写作技法指导[文体指导]本单元的写作任务要求学生以书信形式向笔友传递某种信息，表明一种态度或说明某件事情。书信内容涉及日常生活、学校生活、社会习俗、近期打算等，是高考中的常考类型。一、基本结构第一部分：呼应来信、介绍现状，引入话题。第二部分：叙述经过或针对问题提出自己的看法。第三部分：提出愿望或良好的祝福。二、注意事项1．在说理的过程中要尽量站在对方的角度客观地分析问题，努力做到逻辑分明、理由充分。2．在提建议时，要注意选用合适的词汇或句型委婉地提出自己的建议让对方思考。3．注意写信的格式，即开头(一般给出信的开头)和结尾。[亮点句式]1．常用的开头语Thankyouverymuchforyourletterandthegiftyousentme.Ihavethepleasure/honortoinform/tellyouthat...Imustapologizefornotwritingtoyouforsolong.Iamwritingtoyou...Iamexcited/glad/happytolearnthat...2．常用的正文AlthoughIdon'tknowhowtodealwiththetroubleyouhavementioned，IamveryhappybecauseIhaveachanceto...Iwouldliketobeavolunteer，forIwillbefreeduring...That'saboutit.Let'stalkabout...now.3．常用的结束语Ilookforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Ilookforwardtoseeingyousoon/hearingfromyou.Pleasewritetomewhenyouhavetime.Withbestregardstoyourfamily.Pleasegivemylove/regards/bestwishesto...满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是李华，你的笔友John来信想了解你的海外留学经历，请根据下面提示给他写一封词数100左右的回信。注意：文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJohn，Thankyouverymuchforyourletterandthegiftyousentme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua[审题谋篇]体裁书信时态以一般过去时为主主题介绍海外留学过程人称以第一人称为主结构第一段：介绍现状——秘鲁一所大学攻读学士学位第二段：叙述经过——签证、适应、学习等第三段：提出愿望(已给出)[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．___________n．需要；要求2．___________n.准备；预备3．_________vt.推荐；建议4．_______n.常规；日常事务5．_________适应；调节requirementpreparationrecommendroutineadjustto6．______相适应；相融合7．_________________学士学位8．________________忙着做……；忙于某事物9．_________(迁入新居、更换工作后)安顿下来10．__________保持优秀成绩；继续干下去fitinbachelor'sdegreebeoccupiedwithsettleinkeepitupⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．现在我在秘鲁的一所大学里为我的学士学位而学习。NowI'mstudyinginauniversityinPerufor____________________．2．离开我的祖国前，我花了大量时间排队得到我的签证。BeforeI__________________，Ihadspentmuchtime______________________．mybachelor'sdegreeleftmymotherlandqueuingtogetmyvisa3．虽然我为新生活做了充分的准备，但刚开始我还是不适应。AlthoughI______________________________mynewlife，Ididn't____________atfirst.4．后来，我逐渐地适应了那里的日常生活。Later，Igradually_______________________________there.5．为了提高学习，我的朋友建议我住在当地人家里。Toimprovemystudy，myfriend______________________inalocalfamily.hadmadefullpreparationsforadjusttoitfitinwiththeroutineofliferecommendedmetolive6．当我安顿好以后，我就忙于自己的学业功课。AfterI__________，I_________________mysubject.7．我的导师是一个很严格的教授，他提出很多要求。________isastrictprofessor，andhe_____________________________．8．现在我的功课很好，我会坚持下去。NowIdowellinmysubjectandIwill__________．settledinwasoccupiedwithMytutorputforwardmanyrequirementskeepitup(二)句式升级9．把句子2改写为简单句______________________________________________________________________________________________________10．用非谓语动词改写句子3______________________________________________________________________________________________________Beforeleavingmymotherland，Ihadspentmuchtimequeuingtogetmyvisa.Havingmadefullpreparationsformynewlife，Ididn'tadjusttoitatfirst.11．把句子5改写为复合句______________________________________________________________________________________________________12．用非谓语动词作状语改写句子7______________________________________________________________________________________________________Toimprovemystudy，myfriendrecommendedthatI(should)liveinalocalfamily.Beingastrictprofessor，mytutorputforwardmanyrequirements.[妙笔成篇]________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearJohn，Thankyouverymuchforyourletterandthegiftyousentme.NowI'mstudyinginauniversityinPeruformybachelor'sdegree.Beforeleavingmymotherland，Ihadspentmuchtimequeuingtogetmyvisa.Havingmadefullpreparationsformynewlife，Ididn'tadjusttoitatfirst.Later，Igraduallyfitinwiththeroutineoflifethere.Toimprovemystudy，myfriendrecommendedmetoliveinalocalfamily.Inthisway，Icanimprovemystudy.AfterIsettledin，Iwasoccupiedwithmysubject.Beingastrictprofessor，mytutorputforwardmanyrequirements.NowIdowellinmysubjectandIwillkeepitup.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua