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[文体感知]电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分。[写作规范][题目要求]假定你是王阳，你的网友李明给你发电子邮件，告诉你今年寒假他要去国外旅行，想让你给他一些有关国外旅行的建议。请根据下面的提示给他回一封电子邮件。1．建议：①事先了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯；②保管好身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品；③遵守当地法律，尊重当地风俗习惯；④遇到麻烦，向警察或中国大使馆求助。2．祝李明旅途愉快。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：大使馆embassy。第一步：审题谋篇一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为________________；2．确定人称：以第____人称和第____人称为主；3．确定时态：主要用__________和__________。二、构思第一段：______________________；第二段：________________________；第三段：__________。应用文(电子邮件)一二一般将来时一般现在时点明写电子邮件的目的具体介绍国外旅行的建议祝愿第二步：词汇推敲1．________________文化和风俗2．________________注意3．________遵守4．________________求助警察5．________________有困难6．________________身份证cultureandcustomskeepaneyeonobeyturntoapolicemanbeintroubleIDcard第三步：句式锻造1．知道你寒假要到国外旅行，我很高兴。I'mverygladtoknowthatyou__________________tospendyourwintervacation.2．我愿意给你一些建议。I'dliketo________________.3．这些建议将有助于你安全快乐的旅行。Thetipswill________________________________.4．为了旅途愉快，你应该了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯。Inordertoenjoyyourtrip,youshould______________________,history,cultureandcustomsofthecountries.willtravelabroadgiveyousometipshelpyoutravelsafelyandhappilylearnaboutthelanguage5．当你旅行的时候保管好你的物品，例如身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品。When________,keepaneyeonthethingsyoutake,____________________________________andothervaluablethings.6．除此之外，不同的国家有不同的法律和风俗。_________,differentcountriesmay________________________.7．你必须尊重和遵守当地法律和风俗习惯。Youmust________________________.8．你处境困难。You________________.9.你应求助警察或中国大使馆。Youshould________________orgototheChineseembassy.travellingsuchasyourIDcard,passport,moneyInadditionhavedifferentlawsandcustomsobeylocallawsandcustomsareintroubleturntoapoliceman第四步：句式升级造亮点10．用定语从句合并句2、3。________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．用状语从句合并句8、9。______________________________________________________________________________________________________I'dliketogiveyousometipsthatwillhelpyoutravelsafelyandhappily.Ifyouareintrouble,turntoapolicemanorgototheChineseembassy.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇(注意使用firstofall,second,finally等衔接过渡词)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：DearLiMing，I'mverygladtoknowthatyouwilltravelabroadtospendyourwintervacation.I'dliketogiveyousometipsthatwillhelpyoutravelsafelyandhappily.Firstofall,inordertoenjoyyourtrip,youshouldlearnaboutthelanguage,history,cultureandcustomsofthecountries.Second,whentravelling,keepaneyeonthethingsyoutake,suchasyourIDcard,passport,moneyandothervaluablethings.Inaddition,differentcountriesmayhavedifferentlawsandcustoms,andyoumustobeylocallawsandcustoms.Finally,ifyouareintrouble,turntoapolicemanorgototheChineseembassy.Haveagoodjourney!Sincerely，WangYang[写作提升]假定你是李华，你的美国笔友海伦给你发电子邮件，询问你最近的一次最有趣的旅游经历。请你给她回一封电子邮件。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。DearHelen，I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutoneofmymostpleasanttrips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua参考答案：DearHelen，I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutoneofmymostpleasanttrips.MyfamilyandIwenttoDajiaoGulfforaholidaylastweekend,whichistwentykilometersawayfrommyhome.Havingpackedourcamera,somesnacks,clothesandsomeotherthings,wesetoffat7onSaturdaymorningbycar.Themostexcitingthingwasswimminginthesea.Weenjoyedthebigwaves.Theyalwayscarriedustothebeach.Thebeacheswerefantastic.Thesunriseandsunsetweresimplywonderful.What'smore,theseafoodtherewasverydelicious.Thetripwasanunforgettableexperience.I'dliketoshowyouaroundthereifyoucometoChina.Yours，LiHua[增分佳句]1．开头语①Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutouronedaytournextweekend.收到你的来信我非常高兴，我写信告诉你下周末“一日游”活动的事情。②IammuchpleasedtoinformyouthatIgotthefirstplaceintheEnglishcompetition.很高兴通知你我在英语竞赛中取得第一名。③Howareyougettingalongwithyourstudy?你的学习怎么样？2．正文常用语①Couldyoucometovisitourschool?你能来参观我们学校吗？②Iwouldverymuchlikeyoutojoinus.我真想你能加入我们。③I’dlovetocome，butIcan’tbecauseIhavemuchworktodo.我很想来，但我不能去，因为我有很多工作要做。④Inmyopinion，youshouldstudyhard.我认为你应该努力学习。3．结尾语①I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.期盼尽早收到你的回信。②Allmybestwishestoyou.给你最好的祝愿。③Goodlucktoyou.祝你好运。