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Unit2RobotsSectionⅤWriting——想象类作文写作技法指导[文体指导]想象类作文多是给出简单要点或图表等，要求在此基础上进行合理想象、是一种创造型写作，是半开放式作文的一种。半开放式作文也是近几年高考书面表达的一个热点。一、基本结构1．确定主题融合各种科幻形象的特点，发挥自己的想象力，从而创造出一个生动的角色，确定作文的主题。2．构思情节情节内容的设定要新奇，要能吸引人。这就要求充分发挥自己的想象力，在科学的基础上合理想象。二、写作步骤首先，要从实际生活出发，借助已有的知识，展开合理的、丰富的想象。其次，内容要具体，根据题目的要求和提示，围绕主题想象相关的材料，材料越丰富充实，文章才会越生动，切忌说空话。三、注意事项1．要根据题目要求和提示，确定好主题并围绕主题展开合理而全面的想象，切忌根据自己的喜好而随意想象。2．要注意人称及时态的正确运用。3．要有丰富的表达方式，大胆使用一些较高级词汇及较复杂句式。[亮点句式]1．Weheldadiscussionabout...inthefuture.2．Wecanimagineeverythingwillbedoneeasilyandautomatically.3．Itishardtopredictwhatexactlythefuturewillbelike，buttoexpressimaginaryideasinourmindsisanotherthing.4．Withthedevelopmentofscienceand...，ourlifewillbesurely...5．Mostpeoplethinkthatthelifeinthefuturewill...6．Haveyoueverthoughtaboutthelifewithrobotsinthenext50years?7．Manwillhavetofindanotherplanettoliveon，and...8．Wecouldhaveagreatlife.9．Inthefuturemoreandmore...willappear.10．ThisisthelifethatIamlookingforwardto.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是李华，为了激发学生的想象力，你们学校本周将举行一次以“MyFutureLife”为主题的征文比赛。请根据下列提示写一篇100词左右的短文。1．家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活。[审题谋篇]体裁想象类记叙文时态以一般将来时为主主题我的未来生活人称以第一人称为主结构第一段：点明主题第二段：展开合理的、丰富的想象第三段：概括并回扣主题[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．_______adj.优雅的；高雅的2．_________vt.陪伴；伴奏3．_______adj.数字的；数码的4．_____adj.大的；豪华的；雄伟的5．_____n.全体员工elegantaccompanydigitalgrandstaff6．____vt.服从；顺从7．___________一定做……8．_________________一个家用机器人9．_______________渴望做某事obeybeboundtoahouseholdrobotdesiretodo...Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．我想那时我的生活一定会有很大的不同。Ithinkmylife_____________________________then.2．我的生活将是优雅且令人满意的。Mylifewillbe______________________．3．在未来，我会有一个舒适且豪华的大房子。Inthefuture，Iwillhave_____________________________．isboundtobeverydifferentelegantandsatisfyingacomfortableandgrandhouse4．在房子里面有各种各样的数码设备和家具。Inthehousethereare______________________________andfurniture.5．首先，我希望家里有一个家用机器人。Aboveall，I________________________________inmyhome.6．它可以打扫房子，陪伴并服从我的父母。Itcancleanthehouse，_____________________________．7．我将喜欢我的工作，并和员工们相处得很好。Iwillenjoymyworkand_____________________________．allkindsofdigitalequipmentdesiretohaveahouseholdrobotaccompanyandobeymyparentsgetalongwellwiththestaff(二)句式升级8．用非限制性定语从句合并句子1、2_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ithinkmylifeisboundtobeverydifferentthen，whichwillbeelegantandsatisfying.9．用非限制性定语从句合并句子3、4_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inthefuture，Iwillhaveacomfortableandgrandhouse，inwhichthereareallkindsofdigitalequipmentandfurniture.10．用现在分词短语作定语合并句子5、6______________________________________________________________________________________________________Aboveall，Idesiretohaveahouseholdrobotcleaningthehouse，accompanyingandobeyingmyparentsinmyhome.[妙笔成篇]________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyFutureLifeIoftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifeisboundtobeverydifferentthen，whichwillbeelegantandsatisfying.Inthefuture，Iwillhaveacomfortableandgrandhouse，inwhichthereareallkindsofdigitalequipmentandfurniture.Aboveall，Idesiretohaveahouseholdrobotcleaningthehouse，accompanyingandobeyingmyparentsinmyhome.Inaddition，IhopeIwillworkforacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.Iwillenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwiththestaff.Inmyfreetime，Iwillcontinuetotakeexercise，suchasswimming，runningandvariousballgames.Inaword，myfuturelifewillbericherandmorecolourful.