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Unit1LivingwellSectionⅤWriting——建议信写作技法指导[文体指导]建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。其目的是要使对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。因此建议性书信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、理由充分、具有说服力。正文是建议信的主体部分，其结构如下：1．首段表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。2．主体建议的内容。围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，用科学委婉的语言提出自己的建议、方法。注意要充分考虑到对方的实际问题，表达时应选择得体的语言。切忌用语生硬呆板，泛泛而谈。3．尾段简单地提出希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。[亮点句式]1．建议信开头常用的句式①I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...②Thanksfortrustingme.③Iwouldliketosuggestthat...④Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto...，andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions...2．表达建议常用的句式①Ifeelthatitwouldbehelpfulif...②IfIwereyou，Iwould...③AsfarasI'mconcerned...④Inmyopinion...⑤Asforme...3．建议信结尾常用的句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.②Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.③Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假设你是李华，你市将建一个大型图书馆，考虑到残疾人的需要，请你给负责该项目的总工程师写一封100词左右的信，提出一些合理化建议。要点如下：1．入口处应建轮椅坡道，馆内应设残疾人专用通道和卫生间；2．阅览室应设在一楼，并配备盲人专用软件；3．书架高度的设计应考虑到坐轮椅的残疾人。参考词汇：坡道ramp[审题谋篇]体裁建议信时态以一般现在时为主主题一些合理化建议人称以第一人称为主结构第一段：表明写作意图第二段：提出自己的建议第三段：表达希望[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．_________n．建筑师2．________n.软件3．__________n.轮椅architectsoftwarewheelchair4．______________________残疾人5．______________有机会使用6．_______________对……适合7．__________和；也8．________适合disabledpeople/thedisabledhaveaccesstobesuitableforaswellasadapttoⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．我听说你将成为我们城市新图书馆的建筑师。Ihaveheardthatyouareto____________________thenewlibraryinourcity.2．我考虑到残疾人的需要，我想提出一些建议。Iconsider____________________________，andIwouldliketoofferseveralsuggestions.bethearchitectfortheneedsofdisabledpeople3．首先，我建议在图书馆的入口处设计一个适合轮椅的坡道。First，Isuggestarampthat___________________________bedesignedattheentrancetothelibrary.4．建造一些残疾人适合使用的特殊通道以及厕所。Specialpassages__________toiletsthatthedisabled________shouldbebuilt.5．他们可以很容易地使用它们。Theycan_______________．issuitableforwheelchairsaswellasadapttousethemeasily6．所有的电脑都应该配备专门的盲人软件。Allthecomputersshouldbeequippedwith______________________________．7．这样，他们就可以自由地使用这些书籍。Thus，theycan______________thebooksfreely.specialsoftwarefortheblindhaveaccessto(二)句式升级8．用现在分词作状语改写句2_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Consideringtheneedsofdisabledpeople，Iwouldliketoofferseveralsuggestions.9．用and和sothat...合并句3、4、5_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________First，Isuggestarampthatissuitableforwheelchairsbedesignedattheentrancetothelibrary，andspecialpassagesaswellastoiletsthatthedisabledadapttoshouldbebuiltsothattheycanusethemeasily.[妙笔成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearSirorMadam，Ihaveheardthatyouaretobethearchitectforthenewlibraryinourcity.Consideringtheneedsofdisabledpeople，Iwouldliketoofferseveralsuggestions.First，Isuggestarampthatissuitableforwheelchairsbedesignedattheentrancetothelibrary，andspecialpassagesaswellastoiletsthatthedisabledadapttoshouldbebuiltsothattheycanusethemeasily.Besides，readingroomsshouldbeonthefirstfloor.What'smore，allthecomputersshouldbeequippedwithspecialsoftwarefortheblind.Inaddition，bookshelvesshouldbedesignedtobereachedbypeopleinwheelchairs.Thus，theycanhaveaccesstothebooksfreely.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua