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英语第三板块书面表达专题五书面表达层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你第三讲过渡衔接，巧妙运用01跟踪训练提知能一篇好的文章读起来是抑扬顿挫、圆润通畅、朗朗上口的。词汇再美、句式再高级，若缺乏有效的衔接与过渡，充其量只能是一盘零乱的珍珠，虽光彩夺目却不堪受用。有效地使用过渡成分将亮点语句串“珠”成篇，是成就满分作文的最后一道“工序”。利用好“起”“承”“转”“合”四方法，会让文章读起来自然流畅，彰显考生深厚的写作功底，折服阅卷老师挑剔的目光，为之“倾倒”而给高分。[起]——创造良好开端表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Tobeginwith,becauseIamverygoodatdrawingChinesepainting,IcanintroduceandexplainalotofChinesepaintingknowledgetothevisitors.②(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Accordingtoourtradition，youaresupposedtoarriveearly,sothatyoucanhelpthefamilypreparethedinner,whichisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.③(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)NowI’mwritingtotellyoutheplanforthenextclass.④(2017·天津卷书面表达)Firstly，Iamexpectedtoknowaboutthepolitelanguagerelatedtomyservice.[承]——顺势承上启下表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly,also,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what’smore,furthermore,moreover,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Besides,Ihaveasenseofresponsibilityandrichexperienceinbeingavolunteer.②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Moreover,IlearnedChinesepaintingformorethantenyearsinmychildhood;therefore,Idoknowalotaboutthisgreatartform.③(2017·北京卷书面表达)Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.[转]——巧妙转折过渡表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。①(2018·北京卷书面表达)Though/Althoughtheforeignstudentshavestudiedinourschoolforalongtime，theydon’tknowhowtomaketea.②(2017·江苏卷书面表达)However,Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.③(2017·北京卷书面表达)Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.[合]——完美结束全文表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Lastbutcertainlynotleast,asvicemonitorofourclass,Iamkind,patientandalwaysreadytohelpothers.②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Tosumup,Iwishyoucouldliveuptotheexpectationsofourschool.③(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Inbrief,doastheChinesedowheninChina.④(2018·北京卷书面表达)Ina/oneword,Idohopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ⅰ用过渡性词语完成句子1．Inaddition,yourteachingisbeneficialformetobroadenmyhorizons.TheteachingabouttheculturaldifferencesbetweenChinaandforeigncountriescanbroadenmyhorizons.→Inaddition,yourteachingisbeneficialformetobroadenmyhorizons,___________________________________________________________________．culturaldifferencesbetweenChinaandforeigncountriessuchasthe2．Inthisactivity,thestudentshaveimprovedtheirabilityofcreativity.Inthisactivity,thestudentshaveraisedtheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.→Inthisactivity，thestudents__________haveimprovedtheirabilityofcreativity,____________haveraisedtheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.3．Weshouldavoidusingphoneswhilewalking.Weshouldavoidtalkingwhiledriving.→Weshouldavoidusingphoneswhilewalking__________________________．notonlybutalsoortalkingwhiledriving4．Thecontinuousincreaseinprivatecarshasgivenrisetothetrafficjamandcausedseriousenvironmentalproblems.Iproposeanenvironmentallyfriendlycommute.→Thecontinuousincreaseinprivatecarshasgivenrisetothetrafficjamandcausedseriousenvironmentalproblems,_______________________________________________．5．IamsorrythatIcannotattendschool.I’vegotflu.→IamsorrythatIcannotattendschool______________________．soIproposeanenvironmentallyfriendlycommutebecauseI’vegotflu6．ThedoctorsaidmyinjurywasalittleseriousaccordingtoCTscanning.Thedoctoradvisedmenottomoveforatleastthreedays.→ThedoctorsaidmyinjurywasalittleseriousaccordingtoCTscanning,_______________________________________________．soheadvisedmenottomoveforatleastthreedaysⅡ选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文tobeginwith,lastbutnotleast,moreover,asfarasI’mconcernedDearJim，IamgladthatyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandeagertoexploremore._________________________,theAncientPoetryisyourbestchoice._____________,bylearningChineseancientpoems,youcanhaveanextensiveknowledgeofhistoryandcultureinancientChina._____________,youcanfeelthecharmofthelanguagebyAsfarasI’mconcernedTobeginwithMoreoverreadingpoems,whichhelpstoimproveyourChinese.Tofollowthecoursewell,you’dbetterreadandreciteasmanypoemsaspossible.__________________,itisagoodideatosearchforrelatedbackgroundknowledgesothatyouwillfullyunderstandtheconceptionofpoetry.Whatdoyouthinkofthecourse?Iamsureyouwillhavealotoffunfromit.Yours，LiHuaLastbutnotleast