（江苏专用）2020高考英语二轮复习 专题五 书面表达 考前增分1 第三讲 如何写记叙文的摘要课件

第三讲如何写记叙文的摘要对记叙文进行概括时，要抓住原文的人物、事件、结果三大要素。有些记叙文的结尾有一个点题句，表达深刻内涵或故事带给人们的启示，在写摘要时也需把故事寓意表达出来。一、记叙文摘要的模板1．没有寓意只单纯介绍事件的记叙文摘要模板(1)人物——事件(2)人物——事件——结果2．篇末有表示文章内涵的记叙文摘要模板人物——事件——结果——启示二、开头套用句式Thepassage/storyisaboutamisunderstandingbetweenastudentandateacher.Theauthortellsusastoryabouta________.Thepassageisastoryabout________.Accordingtothepassage,theherointhestory________.Thewritertellsus...(主题)byshowingusanexampleof...,who/which...(故事情节)．Inthepassage,thewritermainlytellsushisexperienceofdoingsth.,which...Thispassageismainlyaboutsb.'sexperienceofdoingsth....请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。注意写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。LastSundayIwentfishing.Aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait,Isatdownonthebankofthelake.Buttwohourslater,Ididn'tcatchanyfish.Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff,preparingtogobackhome.Justthen,Isawanoldmansittingnearme.Tomysurprise,hisbasketwasfulloffish,soIwentovertohim,wantingtoknowwhy.“Excuseme,buthowlonghaveyousathere？”Iasked.“Aboutfourhours，”heanswered.“Fourhours？”Icouldn'tbelievemyears.“Yes.It'sveryimportanttobepatient，”theoldmansaid.“Don'tconsiderfishingatiringsport.Justenjoyit.”Suddenly,Iunderstoodwhathesaid.Imustlearntobepatient.ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently.Ifeltafishtouchthebait,butIdidn'tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin.Atlast,Icaughtit.Thismademeveryhappy.Inthefollowingsixhours,Icaughtover10fish.Onmywayhome,Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank.Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.[解题流程]第一步：确定要素who→谁①I(thewriter)②anoldmanwhat→何事wentfishingwhen→何时LastSundaywhere→何地onthebankofthelakewhy→原因①Ididn'tcatchanyfish②hisbasketwasfulloffish③it'sveryimportanttobepatientresult→结果①learntobepatient②caughtthefishinspiration→启示thesecretofsuccesswaspatience第二步：串联要素Thepassagemainlytellsusthatthewriter,whohadnopatienceatfirst,caughtalotoffishafterbecomingpatientbecauseoftheinfluenceofanoldman.Finally,herealizedpatienceisthekeytosuccess.(2019·扬州模拟)请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。注意写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。Thehardworkingandnever­give­upattitudeofMalaysianbadmintonstarLeeChongWeihaswonmanypeople'shearts.The36­year­oldplayerisalreadyaveteran(经验丰富的人)ofthebadmintonworld.Despitethis,hedoesn'twanttocallitaday.Atthemoment,nosecanceriskeepinghimoutofthegame.Atapressconferenceearlierthismonth,LeesaidthathehopestoreturntobadmintonnextyearandtocompeteinhisfifthOlympicGamesheldinTokyoin2020.“It'sgoingtobetoughtofightforthegoldmedal,butIwilltrymyverybestbecauseit'salwaysmydream，”hesaid.AlthoughLeeisoneoftheworld'sgreatestplayers,hehasneverwonabadmintonworldchampionship.Soifhealthpermits,hewillcontinuetocompetebecausehewantsanOlympicgold.Besideshisgreatdetermination,hisotherdriveishispassionforthesport.“Oneofthemostimportantthingsinlifetohimisbadminton，”Lee'scoachMisbunSodiktoldtheNewStraitsTimes.Aftertwomonthsofcancertreatmentthatcausedeatingandsleepingproblems,recentlyLeebeganalittletraining.参考答案：Thepassagemainlytellsusthatowingtohispassionforbadminton,the36­year­oldbadmintonplayer,LeeChongWei,whoisadmiredbymanypeople,isstilldeterminedtocompeteforanOlympicgoldmedaldespitenosecancer.