高考书面表达运用策略

XiangyuEducationGroup高考书面表达运用策略tobewithus!tobewithus!时间格式词数题材内容NMET2000记叙文100左右看图目击交通事故，警察局里写报告NMET2001说明文100左右根据表格提供的信息写减负回信NMET2002说明文100左右根据表格提供的信息写回信介绍讨论情况NMET2003应用文100左右看图写回信说明找房情况NMET2004记叙文80-120看图记述与邻居交涉过程2004江苏卷说明文100左右根据表格内容介绍家乡江城2005江苏卷说明文100左右根据所给材料谈谈建设和谐社会平时要求：1.格式2.人称3.要点4.时态5.字数6.语法7.书写报纸上有人想寻找一位网友，你有意，给她写一封信，告诉她，你的情况，你的家庭，学校生活。Dearfriend,I’mwritingtheletterinresponsetoyouradvertisement.Iamagirlofthesameagewithyou,andIcomefromahappyandwarmfamily,whichincludesmyfather,mymotherandI.Istudyinakeyschoolfrommyhometown,butIhaveneverregrettedformyownchoice,forthelifehereisverycolorfulandchallenging.IaminterestedinstampcollectingandIhavecollectedalotofstamps.Ialsolikeswimming.IwishIcangetintouchwithyouandhopetobefriendswithyou.Yourstruly,LiHuaDearfriend,Ican’twaittowritetoyou.Havingknownthatyouarelookingforpen-friend,Iamveryeagertobefriendswithyou.Ijustgraduatedfromamiddleschool.Iam18yearsold.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Mymotherisaworker.Myfatherisadoctor.Mysisterisastudent.Myschoolisbeautiful.Ialsowanttolookforapen-friend.Iaminterestedinstamp-collecting.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHua词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4.语言得体要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？语言地道，规范一改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.Theboy,hungry,hurriedhome.二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(写作中的句型转换)1.把其中一句改为分词短语Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.A.合并为简单句二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(写作中的句型转换)2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtinwithhishandstiedbehindhisback.B.合并为复合句1.TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.whichInrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,makespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasant…WiththedevelopmentofsothatBeijing,people’slivesarebecomingmoreandmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.Nowadays,Beijingisdevelopingfastpeople’slivesaregettingmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.C.把复合句改为简单句Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.Havingfinishedherstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.1.把从句改为分词短语C.把复合句改为简单句2.把从句改为介词短语Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.Iinsistedonhimgoing.三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly….Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe……Hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagewhenwe….四.using“complicated/advancedwords”注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。Don’tworryaboutyourexpensesforuniversityeducation,andwewilltrytohelpyou.……andwewillmakethegreatesteffort/doourbest/tryeverymeanstohelpyou.Atthattimethetaxidriverhadtoaskthetouristforhelp.Atthattimethetaxidriverhadnochoicebuttoturntothetourist.Icameupwithagoodidea.Ihadagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.五.有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first,second,then,finally/atlast,soon,suddenly,meanwhile,tobeginwith,intheend空间顺序here,there,ononeside…ontheotherside,infrontof,atthebackof,nextto例举顺序forexample,forinstance,take…forexample,thatis,asfollows,inotherwords,suchas对称顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand转折顺序but,however,while,though,otherwise因果顺序because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of)条件顺序aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless让步顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)ever递进顺序what’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse过渡性插入语Ithink,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语合并为复合句把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。五.有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。一，改变句子的开头方式二，句型转换Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,theye