五年级上册英语作文

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五年级上册英语作文第一部分:五年级上册英语作文PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评MyEnglishTeacherMissTangismyEnglishteacher.She’sverypretty.Sheistallandthin.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.Herhairislong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andshelikessinginganddancing,too.HerEnglishisverygood.WeoftenplaygamesinEnglishclasses.Sheisverykindtous.Weallloveher.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。同学们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。MyDaysoftheweekI’mastudentandIaminGrade5.Igetupatsixo’clockeveryday.Ihavebreakfastathalfpastsix,andgotoschoolatseveno’clock.IhaveclassesfromMondaytoSaturday.IhaveanEnglishclassonFridayandIhaveaPEclassonTuesday.Idon’thavetogotoschoolonschool,andIliketogoswimmingonthatday.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。同学们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。MyFavouriteFoodDoyouknowwhatthisis?Guess!Itscolourisyellow.It’slongandthin.Itlookslikeasmallboatandcrescent.Oh,itisabanana.Doyouknowwhatthatis?Guessagain!Itscolourisorange.It’sround.Itlookslikeasmallballandasmalllantern.Oh,itisanorange.Ilikethenalot.Ilikeice-creams.Iliketochewgum.Chocolatesandcandiesareyummy.Ilikethemverymuch.Howaboutyou?What’syourfavouritefood?【要领点评】MyFavouriteFood是一篇很成功的文章,小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外,文章中出现了一些生词,可见小作者是用心查字典了。IcanhelpdohouseworkIamagirl.MynameisLiLing.I’minClassThree,GradeFive.I’mhelpfulathome.Icanwatertheflowers,emptythetrashandsweepthefloor.Aftermeals,Icanhelpmymotherdothedishes.OnSunday,Icanwashtheclothes.Whataboutyou?Areyouhelpful,too?【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能做的家务,很详细,到位。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。InTheKitchenThisisthekitchenofmyfamily.It’sbigandnice.Look!Mymotheriscookinginit.Thisisamicrowaveandthatisastove.Thereisabigtablehere.Therearemanythingsonit.Whatarethese?Theylookyummy!Oh,they’restrawberries.Andwhatarethose?Theyaregrapes.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。MyVillageMyvillageisverybeautiful.Therearemanyhousesinthevillage.Nearthevillage,thereisaforest.Asmallriverisinfrontofthevillage.Thewaterinitisveryclean.Wecanseesomefishintheriver.Neartheriver,youcanseeamountain.Someflowersandgrassareonthemountain.Ilikemyvillage.Welcometomyvillage!【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。同学们在写作时,可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。篇二:五年级上英语简易作文五上英语简易作文描述一下你的家,你的卧室,或者你的学校,你的教室,用therebe句型。MySchoolMyschoolisnotbig,butitisnice.Therearetwelveclassroomsinmyschool.Thereisacomputerroomonthesecondfloor.Thereisamusicroomonthefourthfloor.Thereisabigplaygroundinmyschooltoo.Therearemanytreesandflowersinmyschool.Ilovemyschool.MybedroomIhaveanicebedroom。Thereisabedinmybedroom.Thereisadeskbesidethebed.Therearesomebooksonthedesk.Thereisachairnearthedesk.Therearemanytoysonmybed.Ilovemybedroom.MyclassroomThisismyclassroom.Therearetwentydesksandfortychairsinit.Thereisabigblackboardinfrontoftheteacher’sdesk.Thereisabookcasebesidetheblackboard.Thereisaclockonthewall.描述一种你的动物朋友,比如狗,猫,兔。MyanimalfriendIhaveananimalfriend.Itisadog.Itisyellow.Ithasbigeyesandlongears.Ithasablacknoseandabigmouth.Ithasfourlegsandashorttail.Itcanjumpandrun.MyanimalfriendIhaveananimalfriend.It’salovelycat.It’swhite.Ithasbigeyesandsmallears.Ithasafatbody.Ithasfourlegsandalongtail.Itcanrunandjump.Itlikesfish.MyanimalfriendIhaveananimalfriend.Itisarabbit.Itiswhite.Ithasredeyesandlongears.Ithasasmallnoseandasmallmouth.Itcanrunfast.Italsocanjump.Itiscuteandfat.说说你的家人或者你的朋友的爱好HobbiesIlikedrawing.Mysisiterlikessinginganddancing.Mybrotherlikesplayingfootball.Mymotherlikesshopping.Myfatherlikesplayingbasketball.Mygrandpalikesreadingbooks.Mygrandmalikescooking.Myfriend’shobbiesTomismygoodfriend.Helikesplayingbasketball,andheisgoodatit.Helikesplayingfootballtoo.Hecanplayfootballwell.Helikesswimmingandskating.Hegoesswimminginsummer.Hegoesskatinginwinter.介绍一下你的网友或朋友的资料Mye-friendIhaveane-friend.HernameisKitty.ShelivesintheUS.Sheis11yearsold.ShecanspeakEnglish.ShelikesMathsandArt.Shelikessinging.MyfriendYangLingismygoodfriend。Sheis11yearsold.Sheistallandthin.Shelikessinginganddancing.ShelikesEnglishandArt.Shecansingwellanddrawwell.Weoftenflyakiteinthepark.介绍家人的职业Myfamily’sjobsMyfatherisateacher.HeteachesEnglish.Mymotherisawriter.Shewritesstories.Sheworksathome.Mybrotherisadoctor.Hehelpssickpeople.Mysisterisafactoryworker.Shemakessweets.Iamastudent.人物除了我也可以是grandpa,grandma,uncle,aunt,都是第三人称单数。描述你的家人或你的朋友在周末的活动,根据活动频率用上always,usually,often,sometimes.AtweekendsAtweekends,SuHaialwayshasdancinglessons.LiuTaousuallyplaysfootballwithhisfriendsatweekends.WangBingoftenhaspicnicswithhisfamilyintheparkatweekends.Tomsometimesgoesswimmingatweekends.AtweekendsAtweekends,myfatheralwaysgoesfishing.Mymotherusuallygoesshopping.Mygrandmaoftenreadsbooks.Mygrandpasometimesplaysfootball.Ioftengotothecinemawithmyfriendsatweekends.说说西方国家圣诞节会如何度过,用上first,next,then,finally。AtChristmasFirst,wegoshoppingandseeFatherChristmas.Next,weputsomeprettythingsontheChristmastree.Then,wewaitforpresents.Finally,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