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1SectionⅦReadingforWriting——有关旅行计划的电子邮件本单元的写作任务是读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件后，给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowriteafterthemodelDearXiaoLi，MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I’veheardthatitisanamazingsight，andIcan’twaittogo.TomethestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It’samazingthattherearemorethan8，000statues，andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We’realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi’an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum，becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”！We’realsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.We’rearrivingat9：30amandwillstartsightseeingrightaway，soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat’sallfornow！I’llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos！Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday？Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend，Richard(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①takeadvantageof利用②asfollows如下2③takeatour游览④setout/off出发⑤aseven-daytrip七日游⑥enjoythescenery欣赏风景⑦leavefor动身去某地⑧togetherwith和……一起⑨aroundthecorner即将来临⑩takeabus乘公共汽车Ⅱ.While-writing假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail,分享你的出行计划。要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右。参考词汇：highspeedrailway高铁book预订Disneyland迪士尼乐园recreationfacilities游乐设施souvenir纪念品ShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseum上海科技馆OrientalPearlTower东方明珠Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.Paragraph2：WhatweshalldoeverydaywhileinShanghai.Paragraph3：Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?Step2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①bookvt.预订②checkin登记③inadvance提前④atthesametime同时⑤afour-daytrip四天的旅行2.Sentences①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as)Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的3精力去参观上海。(sothat)UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst,whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。(fromwhich)WewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.as，sothat，besides，fromwhichDearLiHua，Howiseverythinggoing?Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.Hereismyplan.WeareleavingLilingforShanghaibythehighspeedrailwayataround2：00p.m.onJan.21st.UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst，whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.Onthesecondday，wearegoingtotheDisneylandtoexperienceallkindsofrecreationfacilities，andbuysomesouvenirsatthesametime.Onthethirdday，wewillvisitShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseuminthemorning.Besides，wewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.OnJan.24th，wewilltakethehighspeedrailwaybacktoLiling.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，WangMingⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?□2.Doeseachparagraphhaveaclearmainidea?□3.Doesthewriterusethepresentcontinuoustenseforfutureplans?□4.Doesthewriterusecommas，stops，andquestionmarkscorrectly?4□5.Areallthewordsspeltcorrectly?□6.Areallthepropernounscapitalised?写作要点Timeandtraveldestination：OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.Someotherplacesofinterest：MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum.WearealsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.Meansoftransport：We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.亮点表达1.旅游计划①Mytravelplanisasfollows.我的旅行计划如下。②Here/Belowismytravelplan.这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。③Winterholidayiscoming.Ihaveaplanforit.寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。2.旅游目的地①Thismonth，IwilltraveltoChangshaandZhangjiajiewithmytwofriends，whichissupposedtobeaseven-daytrip.这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。②I’mplanningtotraveltoSuzhou，acitycalledEasternVenice.5我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。③TheMayDayiscoming/approaching，andIamgoingtotraveltoShanghaitoseeitsbeautifulscenery.五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它美丽的风景。3.动身及交通工具①I’mplanningtogotherebytrainandcomebackbybus.我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来。②Wewillsetouton10thJune.我们将于6月10日出发。写作技巧增加亮词的“出镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇，也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背到的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生词汇。因此同学们要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。很多同学作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大量的亮词妙语而不用。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，如“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？