1SectionⅦReadingforWriting——有关英语学习的建议信本单元的写作任务是读关于英语学习的博客内容后,写一篇有关英语学习的建议信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)ReadingtheblogIamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtostudyEnglish.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,IthinkitisimportanttoreciteEnglishwords,whichisverygoodforyou.Then,readingEnglishnewspapersandmagazinesisveryuseful.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatowatchEnglishmovies.Astoyoursituation,IsuggestyoutakemoreandmoreEnglishexercises.Inaddition,youcanlearnEnglishgrammar.Ifyoucanstudyhard,IamsureyoucanimproveyourEnglishinashorttime.IamlookingforwardtoyourEnglishlevelhavingabigchange.(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①idiomn.习语,成语②pronunciationn.发音③grammarn.语法④practicen.练习⑤standardn.&adj.标准(的)⑥splendidadj.灿烂的,辉煌的;(口语)极好的⑦mastervt.精通,掌握⑧referto/consultadictionary查字典⑨haveagraspof=haveacommandof掌握⑩focusone’sattentionon=concentrateon集中(注意力,精力)于⑪enlarge/expandone’svocabulary扩大词汇量⑫follow/takeone’sadvice听从某人劝告⑬communicatewithsb与某人交流⑭formthehabitofreading养成阅读习惯2Ⅱ.While-writingWritealetterabouthowtoimprovelisteningskillsafteryoureadthefollowingblog.Hi!I’vebeenstudyingEnglishsinceprimaryschool.IusedtogethighmarksinEnglish,butnowI’mhavingalotoftroublewithmylistening.WhenIlistentonativeEnglishspeakerstalkinginavideo,Icancatchonlyafewwords.Icanneverquitegetthemainidea.Anyadvice?Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Step2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①memorizev.记住②passagen.一段③pronunciationn.发音④listeningskills听力技巧⑤askforadvice征求意见⑥Englishvideos英语影像资料⑦watchEnglishmovies看英语电影⑧getabetterunderstandingof更好地了解2.Sentences①我很高兴读了你向我征求关于如何提高英语听力技巧的建议的博客。(疑问词+不定式)I’mgladtoreadyourblogaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningskills.②首先,我认为我们应该记住尽可能多的单词,尤其是它们的发音。(firstofall)Firstofall,Ithinkweshouldmemorizeasmanywordsaspossible,especiallytheirpronunciation.③只有到那时,我们听录音时才能意识到这个词的确切含义。(onlythen)Onlythencanwerealizewhatexactlythewordiswhenwelisten3totheaudio.④更重要的是,我们还可以做一些听力练习。(doexercises)What’smore,wecanalsodosomelisteningexercises.⑤问自己一些关于我们听到的短文的问题,这样我们就能更好地理解短文,并从短文中获得更多的信息。(祈使句+so句型)Askourselvessomequestionsaboutthepassagewehear,sowecangetabetterunderstandingofthepassageandgetmoreinformationfromthepassage.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.firstofall,then,forexample,inthisway,what’smoreDearPeter,I’mgladtoreadyourblogaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningskills.Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,Ithinkweshouldmemorizeasmanywordsaspossible,especiallytheirpronunciation.Onlythencanwerealizewhatexactlythewordiswhenwelistentotheaudio.Thenweshoulddopracticeasmuchaswecan.Forexample,wecouldlistentotheEnglishvideos,songsaswellaswatchingEnglishmovies.Inthisway,wecanpracticeourlisteningskillsandimproveit.What’smore,wecanalsodosomelisteningexercises.Askourselvessomequestionsaboutthepassagewehear,sowecangetabetterunderstandingofthepassageandgetmoreinformationfromthepassage.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Yourssincerely,LiHuaⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner,andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewritergiveacleardescriptionoftheproblem?□2.Istheadviceclearlyexplained?□3.Doeseachsentencerelatetothemainidea?□4.Doesthewriterusepronounstorefertothingsorpeoplecorrectly?4□5.Doesthewriterusecorrectspelling,punctuation,andcapitalisation?□6.Arethereanygrammarmistakes?篇章结构Beginning:Thepurposeofwritingtheletter.Body:Yoursuggestions.Thesuggestionsarelistedbythewords“First,Then,Besides...”Theending:Yourhope亮点表达1.WearesupposedtolearnEnglishwellbecausehavingagoodcommandofEnglishmeansmoreopportunitiesinthefuture.我们理应学好英语,因为精通英语意味着在将来有更多的机会。2.Grammarmustbelearnedthroughlanguage,andnotlanguagethroughgrammar.必须从语言中学习语法,而不是从语法中学习语言。3.Don’tworryifyouhaveanytroubleinstudyingChinese,andjusttakeyourtime.学汉语有困难时不要着急,慢慢来。4.IlikeEnglishverymuch,soIoftenhavefunlearningEnglish.我很喜欢英语,因此我经常感觉学英语很有趣。5.Keepingadiaryisaneffectivewaytoimprovewriting.记日记是提高写作水平的一个有效方法。6.Thewaytolearnalanguageistopractisespeakingitasoftenaspossible.学习一门语言的方法就是要尽可能经常地练习说。7.Myhardworkpaysoff,andIamquiteproudofwhatIhaveachieved/theprogressIhavemadeinEnglish.5我的努力没有白费,我为自己在英语方面所取得的进步感到骄傲。8.ItisimportanttotakeanEnglishcourse,asyouwillbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticespeakingEnglishwithyourfellowstudents.参加英语课程很重要,因为你能向老师学习并和你的同学一起练习说英语。9.BylearningEnglishwecanbroadenourhorizonsandincreaseourknowledgeinvariousfields.通过学英语我们能够开阔视野,增加我们各领域的知识。写作技巧段落——合理分段,层次清晰书面表达是主观题。阅卷时率先进入老师眼帘的是卷面、文章结构,因此我们既要重视卷面整洁,又要重视段落写作,即按时间、空间或其他逻辑顺序把相关联的内容安排在相应的段落内,从而做到主题突出、结构合理、层次清晰。这样定会给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。