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-1-SectionⅦWriting——数据性调查报告[文体指导]一、基本结构数据性调查报告属于图表类作文的一种。图表类作文写作一般分三大步：第一步，开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题；第二步，分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写；第三步，归纳总结或发表评论。(有时第三步可省略)二、注意事项具体操作时应注意：1．首先应仔细研究题目以及提示信息，认清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的变化趋势和走向，抓住其主要特点和关键信息，然后根据图表所显示的中心信息确定内容层次以及主题句。2．列出各段主题句。考生可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫。3．围绕主题句完成段落的展开。尽量做到主题明确、条理清晰、文字简练。4．图表作文一般采用的时态为一般现在时，但如果图表中给出了具体时间参照，考生则应对时态进行相应的调整。[亮点句式]1．开头常用句式①Asisshownbythegraph/inthetablethat...②Aswecanseeclearlyfromthechartabove...(概述图表)③Theresultsofthesurveyseemtosuggestthat...(得出结论)2．主体部分常用句式①Comparedwith...②Thereis(was)arapidrisein...③Thechanges...canbeexplainedforseveralreasons.④Itisreportedthat85%of...⑤...arealsothereasonwhythenumberisincreasingsofast.⑥Fromtheincreasednumberwecangetthat...3．结尾常用句式①Inconclusion/Toconclude/Wecandrawtheconclusionthat...②Inmyopinion/Personally，I...-2-③Itseemsclearthat/It'sclearfromthechartthat...[写作任务]看到一位老人跌倒在身边，你扶还是不扶？如今这个问题让不少人纠结不已，某报社对此专门就“你是否会第一时间义不容辞地去扶摔倒的老人？”进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请你写一篇文章向该报社的海外版投稿，描述这一调查结果。要求：1．简单描述该图反映的问题；2．分析原因；3．发表自己的观点。注意：词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Anoldmanhasfalleninthestreet，justseveralstepsaway，wouldyouhelphimorjustpassby？Thissimplequestionhasbecomeadilemmaformanypeople.[审题谋篇]体裁调查报告时态一般现在时-3-主题老人跌倒，扶还是不扶人称第三人称和第一人称结构第一部分，引入：指出现象并提出问题。第二部分，阐述：1.简单描述图表反映的问题。2.分析产生的原因。第三部分，观点：发表自己的观点，提出解决措施。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．conduct执行，进行2．participant参与者3．withouthesitation毫不犹豫地4．bycontrast对比5．definite明确的，确定的6．beaccusedof被控告7．knockover撞倒8．pretend假装9．blackmail敲诈10．insurance保险Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．根据一份报纸的调查，仅仅有百分之六的参与者愿意马上去帮助。(bewillingto)Accordingtoasurveyconductedbyanewspaper，only6%oftheparticipantsarewillingtohelpimmediately.2．关于原因，大多数人担心如果他们去帮助老人，有可能会被控告撞倒了他。(asfor；that宾语从句)Asforthereasons，mostworrythatiftheygotohelptheoldman，theymaybeaccusedofhavingknockedoverhim.3．有一些人也担心老人会假装摔倒。(pretendtohavedone)Somearealsoconcernedthattheoldmanmaypretendtohavefallendown．4．一些老人选择去敲诈帮助他们的人是因为他们没有健康保险来支付他们的治疗。(because引导原因状语从句)Someelderlypeoplechoosetoblackmailtheirhelpersbecausetheydon'thave-4-healthinsurancetocovertheirtreatment．5．如果政府改善这种状况，我相信没有人会冒生命危险去假装摔倒。(if引导条件状语从句)Ifthegovernmentcanimprovethissituation，Ibelievenoonewillrisktheirlifetopretendtofall．(二)句式升级6．用短语withouthesitation改写句1Accordingtoasurveyconductedbyanewspaper，only6%oftheparticipantsarewillingtohelpwithouthesitation.7．用thereisapossibilitythat...句型改写句2Asforthereasons，mostworrythatiftheygotohelptheoldman，there'sapossibilitythattheymaybeaccusedofhavingknockedoverhim.8．用Thereasonwhy...isthat...句型改写句4Thereasonwhysomeelderlypeoplechoosetoblackmailtheirhelpersisthattheydon'thavehealthinsurancetocovertheirtreatment.[妙笔成篇]Anoldmanhasfalleninthestreet，justseveralstepsaway，wouldyouhelphimorjustpassby？Thissimplequestionhasbecomeadilemmaformanypeople.【参考范文】Anoldmanhasfalleninthestreet，justseveralstepsaway，wouldyouhelphimorjustpassby？Thissimplequestionhasbecomeadilemmaformanypeople．Accordingtoasurveyconductedbyanewspaper，only6%oftheparticipantsarewillingtohelpwithouthesitation.Bycontrast，24%admitthattheywillnotdoso.-5-Andtherestdon'thaveadefiniteanswer.Asforthereasons，tobeginwith，mostworrythatiftheygotohelptheoldman，thereisapossibilitythattheymaybeaccusedofhavingknockedoverhim.Second，somearealsoconcernedthattheoldmanmaypretendtohavefallendown.Sowhatshouldwedo？Asforme，thereasonwhysomeelderlypeoplechoosetoblackmailtheirhelpersisthattheydon'thavehealthinsurancetocovertheirtreatment.Soifthegovernmentcanimprovethissituation，Ibelievenoonewillrisktheirlifetopretendtofall.