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-1-SectionⅤWriting——关于戒烟的议论文[文体指导]本模块的话题是“关爱生命，远离毒品”，与此相关的文章多为议论文。此类文章可分三部分来叙述：开头：引入话题，说明文章的中心话题。主体：分析人们吸烟或吸毒的原因；随后讲述这种行为的危害。有时也可采用“正反对比”的形式来论述。结尾：呼吁吸烟者或吸毒者用积极的态度和切实可行的方法戒掉毒瘾；也可以呼吁读者“珍爱生命，远离毒品”，创造一个美好的生活环境。[亮点句式]1．Smokingisharmfulto/doesharmto...2．Smokingcanleadto/cause...3．Thesmokersarelikelytosufferfrom...4．Notonlyissmokingbadforourbody,butalsoitisawasteofmoney.5．Onceyouareaddictedtoit,itisdifficulttogiveitup.6．Somesaidtheystartedsmokingjustbecausetheythought...7．Ihopeallthesmokerscangiveupsmokingforthemselvesandalsoforthepeoplearoundthem.8．AsfarasIamconcerned,weshould...9．Moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedhowserioustheproblemis.10．Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeephealthy.[写作任务]不少年轻人为了显示自己成熟(mature)或耍“酷”而吸烟。请你就这种现象写一篇100词左右的短文，谈谈吸烟的危害并给出你的建议。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________-2-____________________________________________________________________________________________________________[审题谋篇]体裁议论文时态一般现在时主题吸烟上瘾人称第一、二人称结构第一部分：引出话题第二部分：说明吸烟的危害第三部分：呼吁大家戒烟[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．dangerousadj.危险的2．cancern.癌症3．cigaretten.香烟4．berelatedto有关系的，有关联的5．beaddictedto对……上瘾6．giveup戒除；放弃Ⅱ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．认为吸烟很酷，使你显得成熟是错误的。Tobelievesmokingiscoolandmakesyouappearmatureiswrong．2．据报道，全世界每年大约有五百万人死于疾病。Itisreportedthatabout5millionpeopleallovertheworlddiefromdiseaseseachyear.3．这些疾病与吸烟有关。Thesediseasesarerelatedtosmoking.4．吸烟很容易引起火灾。Smokingcancausefireseasily.5．火灾可能严重损害你的生活和周围的环境。Firesmaydogreatdamagetoyourlifeandyoursurroundings.6．只有以这种方式你才能保持健康。Youcankeephealthyonlyinthisway.(二)句式升级7．用it作形式主语改写句1Itiswrongtobelievesmokingiscoolandmakesyouappearmature.-3-8．用过去分词作后置定语合并句2、3Itisreportedthatabout5millionpeopleallovertheworlddiefromdiseasesrelatedtosmokingeachyear.9．用非限制性定语从句合并句4、5Smokingcancausefireseasily,whichmaydogreatdamagetoyourlifeandyoursurroundings.10．用倒装句改写6句Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeephealthy.[妙笔成篇]______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Ithinkitiswrongtobelievesmokingiscoolandmakesyoungpeopleappearmature.Infact,smokingisnotcoolbutverydangerous.First,smokingdoesgreatharmtohealth.Scientificresearchshowsthatsmokingcanleadtoheartdiseases,cancerandotherproblems.Itisreportedthatabout5millionpeopleallovertheworlddiefromdiseasesrelatedtosmokingeachyear.Second,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke.Somestudentsevenstealmoneytobuycigarettes.Onceyouareaddictedtoit,itisdifficulttogiveitup.What'smore,smokingcancausefireseasily,whichmaydogreatdamagetoyourlifeandyoursurroundings.Sogiveupsmokingatonce.Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeephealthy.