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1SectionⅤWriting—电子邮件[文体感知]电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分。[写作规范][题目要求]假定你是王阳，你的网友李明给你发电子邮件，告诉你今年寒假他要去国外旅行，想让你给他一些有关国外旅行的建议。请根据下面的提示给他回一封电子邮件。1．建议：①事先了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯；②保管好身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品；③遵守当地法律，尊重当地风俗习惯；④遇到麻烦，向警察或中国大使馆求助。2．祝李明旅途愉快。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：大使馆embassy。第一步：审题谋篇一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为应用文(电子邮件)；2．确定人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主；3．确定时态：主要用一般将来时和一般现在时。二、构思第一段：点明写电子邮件的目的；第二段：具体介绍国外旅行的建议；第三段：祝愿。第二步：词汇推敲1．culture_and_customs文化和风俗2．keep_an_eye_on注意3．obey遵守4．turn_to_a_policeman求助警察25．be_in_trouble有困难6．ID_card身份证第三步：句式锻造1．知道你寒假要到国外旅行，我很高兴。I'mverygladtoknowthatyouwill_travel_abroadtospendyourwintervacation.2．我愿意给你一些建议。I'dliketogive_you_some_tips.3．这些建议将有助于你安全快乐的旅行。Thetipswillhelp_you_travel_safely_and_happily.4．为了旅途愉快，你应该了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯。Inordertoenjoyyourtrip,youshouldlearn_about_the_language,_history,cultureandcustomsofthecountries.5．当你旅行的时候保管好你的物品，例如身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品。Whentravelling,_keepaneyeonthethingsyoutake,such_as_your_ID_card,_passport,_moneyandothervaluablethings.6．除此之外，不同的国家有不同的法律和风俗。In_addition,_differentcountriesmayhave_different_laws_and_customs.7．你必须尊重和遵守当地法律和风俗习惯。Youmustobey_local_laws_and_customs.8．你处境困难。Youare_in_trouble.9.你应求助警察或中国大使馆。Youshouldturn_to_a_policemanorgototheChineseembassy.第四步：句式升级造亮点10．用定语从句合并句2、3。I'd_like_to_give_you_some_tips_that_will_help_you_travel_safely_and_happily.11．用状语从句合并句8、9。If_you_are_in_trouble,_turn_to_a_policeman_or_go_to_the_Chinese_embassy.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇(注意使用firstofall,second,finally等衔接过渡词)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：DearLiMing，I'mverygladtoknowthatyouwilltravelabroadtospendyourwintervacation.I'dliketogiveyousometipsthatwillhelpyoutravelsafelyandhappily.Firstofall,inordertoenjoyyourtrip,youshouldlearnaboutthelanguage,history,cultureandcustomsofthecountries.Second,whentravelling,keepaneyeonthethingsyoutake,suchasyourIDcard,passport,moneyandothervaluablethings.Inaddition,differentcountriesmayhavedifferentlawsandcustoms,andyoumustobeylocallawsandcustoms.Finally,ifyouareintrouble,turntoapolicemanorgototheChineseembassy.Haveagoodjourney!Sincerely，WangYang[写作提升]假定你是李华，你的美国笔友海伦给你发电子邮件，询问你最近的一次最有趣的旅游经历。请你给她回一封电子邮件。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。DearHelen，I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutoneofmymostpleasanttrips.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua参考答案：DearHelen，I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutoneofmymostpleasanttrips.4MyfamilyandIwenttoDajiaoGulfforaholidaylastweekend,whichistwentykilometersawayfrommyhome.Havingpackedourcamera,somesnacks,clothesandsomeotherthings,wesetoffat7onSaturdaymorningbycar.Themostexcitingthingwasswimminginthesea.Weenjoyedthebigwaves.Theyalwayscarriedustothebeach.Thebeacheswerefantastic.Thesunriseandsunsetweresimplywonderful.What'smore,theseafoodtherewasverydelicious.Thetripwasanunforgettableexperience.I'dliketoshowyouaroundthereifyoucometoChina.Yours，LiHua[增分佳句]1．开头语①Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutouronedaytournextweekend.收到你的来信我非常高兴，我写信告诉你下周末“一日游”活动的事情。②IammuchpleasedtoinformyouthatIgotthefirstplaceintheEnglishcompetition.很高兴通知你我在英语竞赛中取得第一名。③Howareyougettingalongwithyourstudy?你的学习怎么样？2．正文常用语①Couldyoucometovisitourschool?你能来参观我们学校吗？②Iwouldverymuchlikeyoutojoinus.我真想你能加入我们。③I’dlovetocome，butIcan’tbecauseIhavemuchworktodo.我很想来，但我不能去，因为我有很多工作要做。5④Inmyopinion，youshouldstudyhard.我认为你应该努力学习。3．结尾语①I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.期盼尽早收到你的回信。②Allmybestwishestoyou.给你最好的祝愿。③Goodlucktoyou.祝你好运。