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1SectionⅤWriting——如何写一封建议信技法指导1.文体特点建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。写信时，要根据所给材料(多为征求建议的信件)，给出有针对性的解决办法或提出合理的建议。提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要委婉；语言要简明扼要、目的明确．2．亮点句式(1)I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvice.很高兴我收到你征求我建议的信。(2)I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtomakefriends.我写信来说一下如何交友的办法。(3)I'mwritingtosayafewwordstoyouabouthowtoadaptyourselftoseniorhighschoollifeandhowtostudyEnglishwell.我给你写信是为了给你一些适应高中生活以及学好英语的建议。(4)Youhaveaskedforsomeadviceconcerning/onEnglishstudyandIwilltrytogiveyoumysuggestions.你向我征求一些关于英语学习的建议，我将给你一些建议。(5)I'msorrytoknowyouhavesuchadifficultproblem./I'msorryyouarehavingtroublewithyourfriend.Herearesometipsthatmayhelpyou.听到你有困难很难过/听到你交友有困难我很难过。下面是一些帮助你的建议。3．高分模板Dear××，(首段)I'msorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyin________.(提出具体问题)However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.NowI'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtosolveit.(中段)Firstly,whynot________？Ifyoudothat,youwill________.Secondly,youshould________.Youcan________.Inthatwayyouwill________.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideato________.aslongasyou________，Ithinkyouwill________.(给出建议和解决办法)(尾段)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours，LiHua2典题演练假定你是李华，上周末去某个岛上游玩，看见有很多可爱的动物。听岛上的一位老人说，现在动物的数量日渐减少，如果不采取措施，有些动物会有绝迹的危险。回来后你给野生动物保护协会写信，就保护动物提出以下建议：1．制定保护动物的法律；2．建立动物保护区；3．提高公众保护动物的意识。提示：提高意识：raiseone'sawareness注意：1．词数：100个左右；2．涵盖所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当增加细节。[谋篇][遣词]1．保护protect2．减少decrease3．处于……的危险in_danger_of4．灭绝extinction5．惩罚punish6．自然保护区natural_reserves7．提高某人的意识raise_one's_awareness_of8．采取措施take_steps/measures[造句]1．完成句子(1)据说岛上它们的数量在逐年减少。Thenumberofthemis_said_tobedecreasingyearbyyear.(2)如果人们不采取措施，它们有灭绝的危险。Ifpeopledon'ttake_measures,_theywillbein_danger_ofextinction.(3)毫无疑问生活在安全环境的动物最有可能存活下来。3There_is_no_doubt_thatanimalslivinginsafeenvironmentsaremorelikelytosurvive.(4)应采取措施来提高人们的动物保护意识。Somethingshouldbe_donetoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectinganimals.(5)总之，动物保护是非常紧迫的。Tosumup,protecting_animalsisurgent.2．句式升级(6)将句子(1)改写成主语从句：It's_said_thatthenumberofthemisdecreasingyearbyyear.(7)将句子(2)变成被动语态：Ifmeasures_aren't_taken,_theywillbeindangerofextinction.[成篇]_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearSir/Madam，I'mwritingtoexpressmyopiniononhowtoprotecttheanimalsontheislandIvisitedlastweekend.Theanimalstherearelovely,butit'ssaidthatthenumberofthemisdecreasingyearbyyear.Ifmeasuresaren'ttaken,theywillbeindangerofextinction.AsfarasI'mconcerned,lawsconcerninganimalprotectionshouldbemadetopunishthoseillegalhunters.Besides,itisnecessarytosetupnaturalreserves.Thereisnodoubtthatanimalslivinginsafeenvironmentsaremorelikelytosurvive.What'smore,somethingshouldbedonetoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectinganimals.Tosumup,protectinganimalsisofgreaturgencyanditisvitalforustotakestepstoprotectthem.Pleasehelpthepooranimals.Iamsurethattheywillsurvivewithyourhelp.Yours，LiHua4