(浙江专用)2020高考英语二轮复习 专题五 层级二 作文策略 第二讲 句式要高级句子要鲜活教案

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-1-第二讲句式要高级,句子要鲜活句式单一,缺乏生气的文章,哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句,并注意句式的灵活多变,让文章读起来抑扬顿挫,让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现,让作文跨上五档线![策略1]特殊句式,风景独好写作中,如果考生能够使用强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等特殊句式,不仅能彰显考生的英语水平,还能提升写作档次。1.运用强调句①(2019·太原模拟书面表达)Withyourgeneroushelp,IfirmlybelievethatIwilladapttothecollegelifeassoonaspossible.→ItiswithyourgeneroushelpthatIfirmlybelievethatIwilladapttothecollegelifeassoonaspossible.②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Ibelievehardworkwillpayoff!→Idobelievehardworkwillpayoff!2.运用倒装句(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Thegameissosignificantthatitisrequiredthateveryoneshouldbepresentpunctually.→Sosignificantisthegamethatitisrequiredthateveryoneshouldbepresentpunctually.3.运用虚拟语气Ifyoushouldacceptmyapplication,Iwouldsparenoefforttocommitmyselftoyoursatisfaction.→Shouldyouacceptmyapplication,Iwouldsparenoefforttocommitmyselftoyoursatisfaction.4.运用省略句(2019·昆明高三摸底调研书面表达)Whilewetravelalongtheway,wecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryaswellasthenewlooksofthevillagesandtowns.→Whiletravellingalongtheway,wecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryaswellasthenewlooksofthevillagesandtowns.5.it句型①(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Firstofall,bearitinmindthatyouhadbetterarrivepunctuallyorsometimeearlierthantheappointedtime,whichisofgreatsignificancetoshowyourpoliteness.(it作形式宾语)②(2018·江苏卷书面表达)Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowards-2-ratings.(it作形式主语)[策略2]三大句式,编排巧妙1.增加亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次,在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句,或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句,这些都能为文章增加亮点。①(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Everyoneiswelcometowatchthefilm.Ittellsaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.→Everyoneiswelcometowatchthefilm,whichtellsaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.②(2017·浙江卷6月书面表达)WewillgototheSpringMountainandtherewecanhaveaclimb.→WewillgototheSpringMountain,wherewecanhaveaclimb.③(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Further,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest.Itwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.→Further,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.2.提升档次的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句,是写作中常见的高级表达句式。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)IholdthefirmbeliefthatIamtheverypersonforthisjob.(同位语从句)②(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Itisworthmentioningthatourvolleyballteamwonthechampionshiptwiceinnationalmiddleschoolvolleyballmatches.(主语从句)③(2018·江苏卷书面表达)Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.(同位语从句)④(2017·北京卷书面表达)That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice(表语从句).3.吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写作中,状语从句是经常用到的句型,它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。①(2018·北京卷书面表达)SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture,IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUniversityisanidealplaceforyou.②(2018·江苏卷书面表达)Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.-3-③(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Ifyouwanttoapplyformembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsendanemailtopingpong@123.com.④(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)WhenitcomestowhatIcandotohelp,IbelieveIcanbeanoutstandingtourguideintermsofChinesepaintingexplanation.[策略3]活用非谓,手法老到1.运用非谓语动词整合简单句,提升表达档次。写作时,考生可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行整合,使其成为较高级的表达。①Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishCorner.IwillprovideusstudentswithaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.→Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishCorner,providingusstudentswithaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.(现在分词作状语)②Ifeelquitesorryforthat.Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.→Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.(现在分词作状语)2.运用非谓语动词简化复合句,使语言简练。①Whentheairportiscompletednextyear,itwillhelppromotetourisminthisarea.→Theairporttobecompletednextyearwillhelppromotetourisminthisarea.(不定式作定语)②BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgoodasthem.→Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgoodasthem.(过去分词作状语)[策略4]适时感叹,必要强调①HowhappyIwastobeoneofthemembersinthiswarmfamily!Thisisoneofthemosttreasuredmomentsinmymemory.成为这个温暖大家庭的一员,我是多么高兴啊!这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。②Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandrelieveusoftheheavyschoolwork,butitalsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!这件事不仅使我们亲近自然,摆脱繁重的功课,而且增进了我们之间的友谊。多么美好的时光啊!③Howconsiderateofyoutoremembermybirthday!您真得很体贴,还记得我的生日。-4-[策略5]高级表达,佳作之道1.Asthesayinggoes...常言道……Justasthesayinggoes,“Onetreedoesn’tmakeaforest.”,oursuccessisbasedoncooperatingwithothers.正如谚语所言:“独木难成林。”我们的成功是建立在与别人合作的基础上的。2.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...毋庸置疑……Itgoeswithoutsayingthatnothingismoreimportantthanhealth.毋庸置疑,没有什么比健康更重要。3.Thereisnodenyingthat...不可否认……Thereisnodenyingthatitwasmyteacher’sencouragementandhelpthatresultedinmysteadyprogress.不可否认,是老师的鼓励和帮助让我稳步前进。4.Itisagoodideatodosth.做……是个好主意。(2019·重庆调研书面表达)Itisagoodideatotravelwithagoodfriend,whichwillreduceyourtravellingexpenses.与好朋友一起旅行是个好主意,这能减少旅行的费用。5.Itisavirtueandtraditionforsb.todosth.做某事是某人的优良传统和美德。(2019·河南六市联考书面表达)ItisavirtueandtraditionforusChinesepeopletohelpthoseinneed.帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。6.Itisstronglyrecommendedthat...强烈建议……Itisstronglyrecommendedthattheschoolshouldgivestudentsmorefreetimetotakepartinsportsactivities.强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间参加体育活动。7.IfIwere...,Iwould...如果我是……我会……(2019·海口调研书面表达)IfIwereyou,Iwouldmakegooduseofmysparetimetohelphimgetridofthisbadhabitstepbystep.要是我是你的话,我会充分利用业余时间帮助他渐渐地去掉这个坏习惯。8.Isincerelyhopethat...我真诚地希望……(2019·重庆第一次调研书面表达)Wesincerelyhopethatallstudentswillprovideoriginalartworkstocelebrateth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