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-1-SectionⅤWriting有关健康生活习惯的说明文文体感知写有关健康生活习惯的说明文时，一般要写明什么样的做法会对健康有利或有害，人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。该类文章一般采用以下写作策略：1．开门见山提出主题，说明自己所发现的关于健康问题的现象。2．分析所给内容，然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容时可以先说明现象，也可以先说明结果，再说明引起这种结果的原因。3．最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一部分的内容主要是提出解决办法及给出自己的保持健康的建议。增分佳句1．AsfarasIamconcerned,healthismoreimportantthanwealth．依我看，健康远比财富重要。2．Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth．做运动和健康息息相关。3．Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesapersonhealthy,wealthyandwise．早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。4．Itiswidelybelievedthatplentyoffreshaircontributestogoodhealth．人们普遍认为足够的新鲜空气有助于健康。5．Nowadayspeoplearebeginningtopaymoreattentiontotheirhealththaneverbefore．目前人们开始比以前更关注健康。6．Weshouldrejectjunkfood,suchasinstantnoodlesandhamburgers．我们应该拒绝垃圾食品，例如方便面和汉堡。7．Doctorsadviseusteenagerstosleepatleast8hourseachday．医生建议我们青少年每天至少要睡8个小时。8．Peoplecometorealizethatgoodhealthisthemostvaluablethingapersoncanhave．人们开始意识到健康是人所能拥有的最有价值的东西。-2-写作要求假设你是王林。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的健康出现了问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1．之前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少锻炼；2．导致的问题：肥胖，易生病；3．解决的办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起；4．给其他同学的建议：尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯，以保持身体健康。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇词汇推敲1．不健康的生活习惯unhealthy_living_habits/unhealthy_lifestyle2．不吃早餐skip_breakfast/no_breakfast3．垃圾食品junk_food/rubbish_food4．熬夜stay_up_late5．锻炼take_exercise/have_physical_training/do_physical_exercise6．结果；因此as_a_result/therefore/thus7．意识到be/become_aware_of8．保持健康keep_fit/healthy9．摆脱坏习惯break_oneself_of/get_out_of_bad_habits10．均衡饮食a_balanced_diet-3-遣词造句1．完成句子①过去，我养成了一些不健康的生活习惯。(主谓宾结构)In_the_past,_I_formed_some_unhealthy_living_habits．_②我经常熬夜，并且很少进行体育锻炼。(and连接两个并列谓语)I_often_stayed_up_late_and_took_little_physical_exercise．③结果，我肥胖，易生病。(and连接两个系表结构)As_a_result,_I_became_too_fat_and_often_fell_ill．④我意识到了不健康的生活习惯引起的危害。(which引导定语从句)I_became_aware_of_the_harm_which_was_caused_by_unhealthy_living_habits．⑤为了保持健康，我决心改掉这些坏习惯。(sothat引导目的状语从句；不定式短语作宾语)I_determined_to_break_myself_of_these_bad_habits_so_that_I_could_keep_fit．⑥我养成了早睡早起的习惯。(主谓宾结构)I_developed_the_habit_of_going_to_bed_early_and_getting_up_early．⑦两个月过去了，我恢复了健康。(as引导时间状语从句)As_two_months_passed,_I_recovered．⑧我建议其他同学尽快改掉他们不健康的生活习惯。因为健康比任何其他事情都重要。(suggest；because引导原因状语从句)I_suggest_other_students_get_out_of_their_unhealthy_living_habits_as_soon_as_possible,_because_health_is_more_valuable_than_anything_else．2．句式升级⑨用过去分词作定语改写句④I_became_aware_of_the_harm_caused_by_unhealthy_living_habits．⑩用不定式作目的状语改写句⑤To_keep_fit,_I_determined_to_break_myself_of_these_bad_habits．⑪用with复合结构改写句⑦With_two_months_passing,_I_recovered．妙笔成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：-4-Inthepast,Iformedsomeunhealthylivinghabits．Forexample,Ioftenskippedbreakfastandlikedeatingjunkfood．Besides,Ioftenstayeduplateandtooklittlephysicalexercise．Asaresult,Ibecametoofatandoftenfellill．Luckily,Ibecameawareoftheharmcausedbyunhealthylivinghabits．Tokeepfit,Ideterminedtobreakmyselfofthesebadhabits．Firstly,Ibegantohaveabalanceddiet．Secondly,Itookexerciseactivelyeveryday．Lastly,Idevelopedthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly．Withtwomonthspassing,Irecovered．Isuggestotherstudentsgetoutoftheirunhealthylivinghabitsassoonaspossible,becausehealthismorevaluablethananythingelse．假如你是李华，你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适，因此写信向你询问如何保持身体健康，请你根据以下要点提示用英文给她回信。1．合理饮食，避免吃脂肪高及含糖多的食物，多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果；2．锻炼身体，合理锻炼有助于身体健康；3．保证充足睡眠，不要熬夜；4．你的其他建议……注意：1．词数80左右；2．信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJane,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter．Butatthesametime,I’msorrytohearthatyouarenotverywellthesedays．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear_Jane，I’m_glad_to_receive_your_letter．_But_at_the_same_time,_I’m_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_not_very_well_these_days．Inyourletteryouaskedmehowtostayhealthy．Hereismyadvice．Firstly,-5-youshouldkeepabalanceddiet．Youshouldavoideatingfoodhighinfatandtoomuchsweetfood．You’dbettereatmorefreshvegetablesandfruit．Secondly,takingexerciseeverydayhelpsbuild(up)astrongbody．Whynottakemoreexerciseinyoursparetime?Asweallknow,regularexerciseisanimportantpartofkeepingushealthy．Finally,makesureyouhaveenoughsleepandyoumustn’tstayuptoolateatnight．Byeatingproperlyandexercisingregularly,youcankeepyourbodyataproperweightandstayhealthy．Itrulyhopemyadviceishelpfulandyou’llgetwellsoon．Bestwishes!Yours_sincerely，Li_Hua