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1三、读写任务类——说明文典例请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。1.Theotherday，anetizen(网民)sharedaphotoonSinaWeibo.Itwasaboutanoldladystandinginfrontofacarthatwasonabicyclelane，andinsistingthatitleavethetrack.Thephotodrewabout7,000commentsonthesocialmediaplatform.Despitethethumbs-up(点赞)giventotheoldlady，somearguedthatattentionshouldbepaidtoourheavyroadtraffic.2.Someridersofe-bikesandbicyclescomeandgoinalldirections，ignoringtrafficlightsandothervehicles.Suchruderidingcontributestothedisorderoftraffic.Thustheavoidableroadaccidentsbecomeunavoidable.写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的满分作文Thetrafficissueisahardnuttocrack.Itnotonlyaffectsoureverydaylife，butmayalsothreatenpeople’slives.Threeselectionspresentedabovearetypicalexamples.Quiteafewthingsgiverisetothetrafficproblems.Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways，thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement，becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.What’sworse，somedrivers，cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.Infact，trafficrulesarepartoftherulesandregulationscloselyrelatedtop阅卷老师点评1.本文在高级词汇的使用，过渡词句的运用，以及句式结构的多样化等方面做得非常到位。要点齐全，层次分明，过渡自然，结构紧凑。2.范文严格按照“三步走”的格局：第一段用30词(不含标点)概括了所给材料，得益于使用了notonly...butalso...这一经典句型。第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因，使用了giveriseto，large-scaleconstructionof，theincreasingnumberof，(be)vitalto等高级词汇，同时what’sworse衔接2主要原因；3.根据你的分析，从社会规范(rulesandregulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。ublicorder.Withoutthem，peoplecouldnotenjoyharmonyorthecountrywouldbeinchaos.Butrulesalonedon’tsecureanorderlysociety.Itisthepeoplewhoobeytherulesthatmatter.Itiseverybody’sdutytoobservethemtokeepoursocietyinorderandgoingontherighttrack.词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。3.第三段句型多样，使用了without虚拟语气，itis...that...强调句型，itisone’sdutytodosth.等句型，为文章增色不少。一、说明文的概括技巧说明文通常会有明确的主题句，先抓住关键词，并根据各段落的主题，有序地组织语言，完整表达出文章的中心内容。如果是分析型说明文，概括时要找出文章所说明的现象、产生该现象的原因及解决问题的方法或建议，然后用自己的话重组信息点。概括时要找出：1.文章说明的是什么现象？2.造成这种现象的原因是什么？3.解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议是什么？二、说明文读写任务类常用句型1.Thisarticledealswith/discusses/analyzes/stronglyemphasizestheimpactof...2.Thisarticlenotonlydescribes...butalsosuggests...3.Thisarticlecomparesthedisadvantages/benefitsof...andsummarizeskeyfindings...4.Thisarticlegivesanaccountof/providesananalysisof/providesamethodof...5.Thisarticleshows/tellsusthat...6.Theauthorfindsitnecessaryto.../Thepurposeofthereportistoshowthat...7.Theauthorholdstheideathat...，givingitanexampleofsb.who...8.Theauthorstronglyemphasizesthebenefitsofgettingupearlysuchas...9.Thisarticlepointsoutthecommonphenomenon，which...(补充解释)3XueZhaofeng，aprofessorfromPekingUniversity，reportedlyhasmorethan170,000subscriberstohisonlineteachingcourseandcouldbemakingabout35millionyuan($5.3million)ayear.Xueisonlyoneamongthehundredsofonlineteachersmakingmillionsofyuanamonth.AccordingtoiResearch，anagencyspecializinginInternetdatacollection，theonlineeducationmarketwasworth156billionyuanbytheendoflastyear，anditisexpectedtoreach260billionyuanby2019.Onlineeducationhasalsofoundmentioninthisyear’sCentralGovernmentWorkReport，whichPremierLiKeqiangdeliveredtotheannualNationalPeople’sCongress.Wecanthusconcludethatonlineeducationnotonlyhashugeeconomicpotential，butitalsoenjoysgovernmentsupport.Onlineeducationisnotwithoutproblems，though.Someonline“educators”areextremelypopularyettheyhardlyteachstudentsanythinguseful.Worse，thereishardlyanysupervisionofonlineeducationagencies.AChinaCentralTVreportonNov17saidquiteahighpercentageofsuchagenciesarebeingoperatedwithouttheeducationbureaus’acknowledgement.写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述网络课程流行的原因以及你对网络课程健康发展的建议。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文Withtheavailabilityofricheducationalresources，onlineeducationisbecomingincreasinglypopular，bringingonlineteachersandagenciesalargefortune.However，onlineeducationhascausedsomeproblemsworthpayingattentionto.Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforitspopularity.Nowadays，4Chineseparentsattachgreatimportancetoeducation，willingtopayforextracoursestoensuretheirchildren’sacademicsuccess.Besides，itisconvenientforstudentstogetaccesstoonlinecoursesandfollowtheirownpaceofstudy.Thusonlineeducationalsohelpspeoplesavetimeandmoney.Frommypointofview，onlineeducationisawiseoption，butessentialmeasuresshouldbetakentoguaranteeitshealthydevelopment.Educationauthoritiesshouldstrictlyregulatethenationalstandards.Moreover，onlineteachersandagenciesareexpectedtoofferqualityeducation.Aboveall，studentsshouldrealize，nomatterhowusefulonlineeducationis，itcannotcompletelyreplaceschooleducation.