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-1-PeriodⅣWriting|应用文写作——写信表达观点本单元写作要求是写信表达观点，即通过写信的方式就某个话题或社会现象等发表自己的看法或见解。写此类文章时应注以下事项：1．结构：一般采用三段式模式首段：引出话题，点明个人观点；中段：分条阐述理由，其中包括给出数据、例证、反证或评论；尾段：总结。2．人称及时态：多用第一、三人称和一般现在时。1．开头常用句式①Recently...hadaheateddiscussionaboutwhether...ornot.近来，……关于是否……进行了热烈的讨论。②Havingreadyourarticleconcerning...,Iamwritingtoexpressmyopinionabout...读过关于……的文章后，我想写信表明我对……的观点。③Iwasverymuchconcernedtoreadthat...读过……后，我非常担心。④Peopleholddifferentopinionsabout...人们对……持不同的观点。2．主体段落常用句式①Iaminfavorof/support...我同意/支持……②Iamagainst/disagree...我反对/不支持……③Inmyopinion/Inmyview/Personally,Ithink.../AsfarasIamconcerned...在我看来/就我而言……④Firstofall,itwouldnotbeagoodideato...首先，……不会是个好主意。⑤Consequently,Istronglyobjecttotheexistenceof...因此，我强烈反对……的存在。-2-⑥Iwouldsuggestyou...我建议你们……⑦Firstly;secondly;besides(this);inaddition(tothis);what'smore;furthermore;moreover;inaword;inshort;evenworse...首先；其次；除此以外；另外；而且；此外；而且；总而言之；简而言之；更为糟糕的是……⑧Onlyinthiswaycanwe...只有这样，我们才能……3．结尾常用句式①Tosumup/Summingup/Toconclude/Inconclusion...总的来说……②Alltheaboveconsidered,Ibelievethat...综上所述，我相信……③Iwouldappreciateitifyoulookedintothematter.如果你们能调查此事，我将不胜感激。燃放烟花爆竹曾是春节庆祝活动中最重要的习俗之一。然而，政府已在许多数城市下令禁止燃放鞭炮。现在某杂志社就此问题征求人们的看法，请你以李华的身份写信阐明你的观点及理由。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：燃放烟花爆竹lightfireworksandcrackers；二氧化硫sulfurdioxideDeareditor，Yourssincerely，LiHua[精彩范文]Deareditor，-3-Inrecentyears,peopleinmostcitiesarenotallowedtolightfireworksandcrackersduringtheSpringFestival.AndI'minfavourofthepolicy.First,fireworksandcrackerswillcauseairpollution.Whenfireworkissetoff,itwillproducelotsofsulfurdioxidewhichisveryharmfultoourenvironment.Second,fireworksandcrackersareverydangerous.Notonlydofireworksandcrackersoftencauseinjurytopeoplebutalsocausefireaccidents.Allinall,Ithinkitisreasonabletobanlightingfireworksandcrackers.Yourssincerely，LiHua总评本文使用了正确的书信体格式，使用第一人称和第三人称及一般现在时来阐述观点；范文内容涵盖所有要点，结构严谨，观点明确，给出理由充分合理，具有说服力。[亮点呈现](1)范文首段用AndI'minfavourofthepolicy.明确表明观点。(2)范文使用First,Second分条阐述理由，逻辑性强；尾段使用allinall再次阐明个人观点。(3)范文中多处使用高级句式，如定语从句whichisveryharmfultoourenvironment及倒装句Notonlydofireworksandcrackersoftencauseinjurytopeoplebutalsocausefireaccidents.等，使句式更加灵活多变，不落俗套。随着人们对自身健康的关注和环保意识的增强，现在越来越多的人放下手中的方向盘，握起了自行车的车把，请你以李华的身份给某报社写一封信，阐述你的看法。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Deareditor，Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeopleprefertouseabikefortransportationratherthandrivecars.Yourssincerely，-4-LiHua[精彩范文]-5-课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。TheLanternFestivalfallsonthe15thdayofthe1stlunarmonth,usuallyinFebruaryorearlyMarchinthesolarcalendar.__1__(date)backtotheWesternHanDynasty(202BC－9AD),it__2__(become)agrandfestivalwithgreatsignificance.Tilltoday,thefestivalisstillheldeachyeararoundthecountry.Inthedaytimeofthefestival,__3__(performance)suchasdragonlanterndances,liondances,landboatdancesandbeatingdrumswhiledancing__4__(stage).Onthenight,lanternsofdifferentcolorsandshapesarelitupinthestreets,attractingcrowdsofpeople.Childrenwillholdselfmadeorboughtlanternstowalkonthestreets,__5__(extreme)excited.Peoplealsolikeguessinglanternriddlesthatday.Lanternownerswriteriddlesonapieceofpaperandpostthemonthelanterns.Ifvisitorshavesolutions__6__theriddles,theycanpullthepaperoutandgototheownerstochecktheiranswer.Ifthey'reright,theywillget__7__littlegift.Besides,thefestivalisaday__8__(appreciate)thefullmoonandeattangyuan.Someaspectsofthefestivalarefadingnowadays,__9__peoplestillseetheLanternFestivalasachancetospendwithfamilyandwishfor__10__(happy)．1．________2.________3.________4.________5．________6.________7.________8.________9．________10.________答案：1.Dating2.became3.performances4.arestaged5.extremely6.to7.a8.toappreciate9.but10.happiness-6-Lanternsofvariousshapesandsizesarehunginthestreets,attractingcountlessvisitors.各式各样形状和大小的花灯悬挂在街上，吸引着无数游客。