2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 5 The power of nature Section

-1-SectionⅤWriting描写旅游景点对应《同步写作跟踪突破》P18技法指导描写旅游景点属于描写性说明文，所以它首先具备说明文的特点，即要按照一定的顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等)和描写方法(先总后分、由整体到局部、由概述到细节等)来展开描写。其次，要重点突出，详略得当。写作时应重点描写旅游景点的特别之处，突出其独特的风景特色、历史典故、地理风貌、风土人情、传说故事、民族习俗或古迹名胜等，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。最后，语言要生动，富有感染力，使读者有身临其境之感且能激起其强烈的旅游欲望。一、描写旅游景点类写作一般分为三部分第一部分：整体介绍。交代清楚自己要介绍的对象是什么。第二部分：按照一定的顺序具体描写景观，着重展示其最具有代表性的地方，使读者如睹其物，如临其境。第三部分：总结景观魅力，希望读者能亲身体验该景观。二、写作过程中的注意事项1．合理安排说明顺序。在介绍方位时，最好按空间顺序来写，这样会使读者一目了然，在脑海中有一个清晰的方位图。2．时态相对较为统一。多用一般现在时，如涉及到历史事件的描述，则用一般过去时。3．自然景观与人文景观的有机结合。对自然风景进行描述，同时结合景观的历史及当地的风土人情、生态、环境保护等知识，以达到自然景观和人文景观的和谐统一。4．抒发感情，融情于景。景点介绍不同于一般的说明文，在描写景物时可抒发个人情感。黄金表达①Locatedin...,itcoversanareaof...②Itliesin/to/on...,coveringanareaof...③Ithasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartouristattractionsfor...④Itiswellknown/famousfor/as...⑤Ithasapopulation/anareaof...,withahistoryof...⑥Theweatherheregetsneithertoocoldnortoohotalltheyearround.⑦Ifyoucomehereforavisit,youwillhaveachancetoenjoy...⑧Withitspleasantclimate,richnaturalresourcesandpicturesquescenery,itisoneofthemajortouristcitiesinChina.⑨Knownas...,itattractsvisitorsfromallovertheworld.⑩Awalkaround...,itisafeastforyoureyes.-2-[典题演练]写一篇短文介绍华山。要点如下：1．华山位于陕西省华阴县，是我国著名的五岳(FiveSacredMountains)之一；2．华山有五座山峰，分别为东峰、西峰、南峰、北峰和中峰；3．可以步行上山，也可乘索道(ropeway)或缆车(cablecar)。注意：1.词数120左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。MountHua____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________谋篇布局1．体裁：说明文2．话题：旅游景点介绍3．时态：一般现在时为主4．人称：第三人称为主5．结构开头：简要介绍华山中间：详细叙述华山景色结尾：欢迎人们到此一游联想词汇1．坐落于__________________答案：belocated/situatedin2．国内外闻名__________________答案：befamousathomeandabroad3．吸引某人的注意力__________________答案：attractone'sattention4．很多__________________答案：anumberof5．参观__________________答案：payavisitto连词成句1．坐落于陕西省华阴县，华山是中国五岳名山之一。-3-MountHuaislocatedinHuayincounty,ShaanxiProvince,anditisfamousintheworldasoneoftheFiveSacredMountainsofChina.→LocatedinHuayincounty,ShaanxiProvince,MountHuaisfamousathomeandabroadasoneoftheFiveSacredMountainsofChina.(升级句)2．到了山顶，你可观赏云海。Whenyouarriveatthetop,youcanseemanyclouds.→Arrivingatthetop,you'llenjoytheseaofclouds.(升级句)3．你可步行上山，也可乘索道或缆车，沿途可欣赏美景。Youcangothereonfoot,taketheropewayorrideinacablecar.Youcanenjoybeautifulscenesontheway.→Youcanclimbtothetoponfoot,taketheropeway,orrideinacablecar.Thetripisfantastic,alongwhichyoucanenjoybeautifulscenes.(升级句)连句成篇MountHuaLocatedinHuayincounty,ShaanxiProvince,MountHuaisfamousathomeandabroadasoneoftheFiveSacredMountainsofChina.Ithasfivemainpeaks:theEastPeak,theWestPeak,theSouthPeak,theNorthPeakandtheMiddlePeak,eachofwhichhasanunusualstory.Atthefootofthemountain,thewaterfallswillfirstattractyourattention.Onthewaytothetop,you'llseeanumberofstrangehillsanduniquerocks.Arrivingatthetop,you'llenjoytheseaofclouds.Youcanclimbtothetoponfoot,taketheropeway,orrideinacablecar.Thetripisfantastic,alongwhichyoucanenjoybeautifulscenes.Nowitisattractingmoreandmorepeople.Whynotpayavisithere?[跟踪训练](2019·河北衡水中学高三二调考试)假如你是一名英国学生Harry，有一位中国笔友LiHua想了解一下你的家乡爱丁堡，请你根据提示回复一封电子邮件。提示内容：爱丁堡：苏格兰的首府，政治和文化中心。人口：约46万。面积：264平方公里。地理位置：苏格兰(Scotland)的东南部。交通：机场位于市中心，公共交通十分便利。天气：气候温和(mildclimate)。-4-旅游：最受欢迎的旅游城市；古老建筑众多；每年吸引200多万名游客，是理想的度假胜地。注意：1.词数110左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiHua，Howarethingswithyou?TodayI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutEdinburghwhichyouaskedaboutinthelaste­mail._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully，Harry[精彩范文]-5-[名师点评]①Withtheairportlying...作者正确运用本单元所学核心语法独立主格结构作状语，表达简练流畅，准确达意。②作者运用含有名词性从句以及现在分词短语作状语(whereveryouaregoingusing...)的高级句式为本文亮点，可为本文添分。③含主语从句的高级句式：Whatmakesituniqueisitssplendidancient...体现了作者较高的语言驾驭能力。[总评]本文首先介绍了爱丁堡的地理位置、人口分布等基本情况，然后对其交通、旅游特色和名胜作了介绍，最后发出邀请。全文文笔优美，行文结构紧凑，用语恰当贴切。课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Thesedays,modernbuildingsareeverywhere.Butifyouwanttosee__1__lifewasbackintheolddays,Chinastillhasmanybeautifulwater__2__(town)tovisit.CNNhaschosenfourofthecountry'smostbeautifulones.ThevillageofZhouzhuanginJiangsucalls__3__(it)“theoldestwatertowninChina”.Thevillage,which__4__(build)in1086,iscrossedwithcanals.Takingaboatridethroughtown,theredlanternsmightmakeyouthinkofChina'sromanticpast.Hongcun,__5__(fill)withlakesandbeautifulAnhui－stylebuildings,is900-6-yearsold.Itwasbuilttolooklikeabigox.HuangshanMountainisthehead;thetownisthebodyandthebridgesarelegs.FenghuanginHunandoesn'tlooklikeabird,__6__itsnamemeans“phoenix(凤凰)”inChinese.Thetownisasbeautifulasthe__7__(magic)bird.Thestilted(吊脚的)buildingsoneachsideoftheTuojiangRivermakethearealooklikeascenefrom__8__postcard.Whilemostwatertownsareinthesouth,Shandong'sTai'erzhuangstandsoutinthenorth.Thetown__9__(be)onthebankoftheBeijing－HangzhouGrandCanal.Inthetown,thereareancientbridges,acanalandtemples,__10__(make)youthinkofitspastglory.1．________2.________3.________4.________5．________6.________7.________8.________9．________10.________答案：1.how2.towns3.itself4.wasbuilt5.filled6．but7.magical8.a9.is10.making