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-1-PeriodⅣWriting|概要写作——运动故事本单元的写作项目是概要写作，主题为运动故事。作为高中生的大家，运动和学习其实一样重要。只有好的身体，才能让我们有活力、有信心的好好学习文化知识。写作时要注意以下几点：1．细读原文，把握大意。首先要仔细阅读原文，然后对其进行整体分析，掌握原文大意和结构，明确全文的主题和各段的段落大意。运用其特有的活力特征，整体文章应体现积极、健康。2．提炼要点，转述观点。分析原文的内容和结构，将各要点分项简明扼要地表述，注意在结构上的顺序。3．草拟提纲，写出初稿。将挑选出来的要点作为框架草拟详细的提纲，以所列的提纲作为依据写出概要的初稿，并注意专有运动名词的拼写。1．开头常用句式①Allstudentsareencouragedtotakepartinasport.鼓励所有的学生都要参加一项体育运动。②Youhavetohaveastrongwilltocompeteinindividualsports.你必须意志坚强才能参加个人体育项目的竞争。③Alotofschoolshavetheirownsportsteams.许多学校有自己的运动队。④Sheexcelsatsports.她在体育运动方面很优秀。2．主体段落常用句式①Myambitionwastoplaysportatthehighestlevel.我的志向就是成为最高水平的运动员。②Footballisthemostpopularspectatorsport.足球是人们最爱看的运动。③Kasparovbecameworldchampion.卡斯帕罗夫成了世界冠军。-2-④Afterhewontheamateurchampionshipheturnedprofessional.他获得业余赛冠军后就转为了职业运动员。3．结尾常用句式①Trytofitsomeregularexerciseintoyourdailyroutine.尽量在日常生活中安排一些经常性的锻炼。②Gentleexercisecanbebeneficialforolderpeople.运动量不大的锻炼对年长者有益。③Youcandoexercisestostrengthenyourstomachmuscles.你可以通过锻炼来增强腹部肌肉。④Takingregularexerciseisthebestwaytoimproveyouroverallhealth.经常锻炼是改善整体健康状况的最佳方法。阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Whosaysyouhavetostayinsideyourhomewhenitiscoldoutside?There'sanunusualsportpracticedinthenorthernUnitedStates,andtheseasononlystartswhenwindsstartblowingandthetemperaturedropsbelowzero.Thesportiscallediceboating.ClementChua,whocomesfromamuchwarmerclimate,islearningallabouticeboating.Chuasignedupforaniceboatingclassbecausehewantedtodosomethinghecouldn'tdoathome.Oneexperiencediceboatercallsthesport“ephemeral”.Inotherwords,theconditionsforiceboatingdonothappenveryoften.Andwhentheconditionsareright,theyarenotrightforverylong.“Youcangoforweeksinthewinterwhenyoucan'tgoiceboating，”says81yearoldLloydRoberts.Robertshasbeeniceboatingfor40years.Hesaysdedicatediceboatersmakethesportamajoreventintheirlives,justafterfuneralsandweddings.ThecapitaloficeboatingintheUnitedStatesisnowthenortheasternstateofMaine.ItoncewasNewJersey.ButthecapitalmovednorthbecauseMainehascolderwintersthanbefore,andNewJersey'swintersaresometimestoowarmforgoodicetoform.Chuasaysiceboatsarelikesmallsailboats,buttheyhavesharpbladesdesignedforskimmingovertheice.Theboatscatchthewindandmovefastonclearandsmoothice.Robertssaysthereareonlyaboutsixgooddaysforiceboatingeachwinter.JimThielerisaseriousiceboater.Hesaysthereisalwaysaconcernaboutgetting-3-wet,becausesometimestheiceisnotstrongenoughtosupporttheweightofboththeboatandtheboater.Thatiswhyiceboatersalwaysgooutingroups,andwearspecialequipment.Youneedtowearcleatstoavoidslippingontheice.Youalsoneedwarmclothes,becausesometimesthewindwillstopblowing,andboaterscanstayinthecoldforalongperiodoftimebeforetheymakeitbacktotheland.[精彩范文]IceboatinginwinterinthenorthernUnitedStatesbecomespopularwithpeople.(要点1)Iceboatingisauniqueactivity,whichrequiresspecialweatherconditions,skillsandcourage.(要点2)NowthecapitalhasmovedfromNewJerseytoMaine,whichmainlyresultsfromthetemperature.(要点3)Forthosewhoareinterestedinthesport,someprotectivemeasuresareessentialincaseofdanger.(要点4)总评本篇范文将原文整理为四个要点，第一个要点是对文章的总体概括；接着，按照原文的顺序，在不曲解文章大意的基础上，进行了同义句转换，用词精准、句式高级。[亮点呈现](1)Iceboatingisauniqueactivity,whichrequires...使用了定语从句，使表达更加清晰准确。(2)incaseof使用固定短语，传达句意清楚又不失精炼。阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Groupexerciseisoneofthemostusefulwaystoimprovephysicalhealthandmaintainahealthylifestyle.Groupexerciseischallengingbutfun!Ofcourseeveryoneknowsthatexerciseisgoodforthebody.However,studieshaveshownthatwhenexerciseisdoneingroups,itisgreatforimprovingnotonlyphysicalhealthbutalsomentalhealth.Itisachancetobesocialandimproveyourstrength.Also,groupexercisecreatesacommunity(团体)feelandthesharedcommongoalmakesparticipantsworkhard.Anotherbeneficialaspectofgroupexerciseistheinformationalsupportparticipantsreceivefromtheinstructor.Ifyoufearthegymbecauseyoufeellost-4-anddon'twanttoembarrassyourself,thengrouptrainingisabetterchoiceforyou.Itisanawesomechancetolearnmoreabouthealththroughtheclearinstructionandsupervision(监督)ofafitnessinstructor.Ifyouaretiredofwanderingaroundthegymwastingtimeandbecomingbored,youcanattendanoptimisticgroupexerciseclassthatwillkeepyourexerciseintherightdirection.Ifyouareseriousaboutwantingtoliveahealthylifestyle,itisveryimportanttosurroundyourselfwithpeoplewhowillprovideyouwiththeproperemotionalsupport.Iwouldn'tspeakangrilytoanyonefordecidingtopartyontheweekends,andinturnIwouldn'texpectanyonetoscoldmeforfocusingonmyhealth.Surroundyourselfwithpeoplewhoencourageandunderstandyou!Plantogoforajogwithafriend,andthentryafunhealthyrestaurantorfreshjuicebar!Surroundingyourselfwithpeoplewhowillprovideyouwithsupportcanbeverybeneficialwhileworkingtowardsreachinghealthgoals.First,decidetodoitforyourselfandworktowardsmaintainingapositivemind.Thenmakesurethepeopleyousurroundyourselfwitharesupportive.Don'tletnegativity(消极性)ruinyourmotivation(积极性)．写前导读：本文是一篇说明文。想运动却又不能坚持，不如试试团体运动！[精彩范文]-5-课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。Firstbuiltin495AD,ShaolinTempleisfamous__1__thecoexistence(共存)ofChanSchool(禅学)andmartialarts.ItbecamefamousintheSuiandTangDynasties.IntheearlyTangDynasty,the13monks__2