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评委总结发言(表达感谢时用):Goodafternoon,excellentcontestants,it’smygreatpleasuretobehereasajudgeforthisEnglishspeechcompetition.Ithinkallcontestantsdidagreatjobtoday,andI’dliketoshowmythankstoeveryonewhohascontributedtoorganizethecompetitionandhashelpedtomakeitasuccess.Solet’sgiveabigroundofapplausetoallofthem.FinallyIwouldliketotakethisopportunitytowishallthecontestantsthebestofluckandgreatsuccessinyourfuture.对选手整体水平的肯定:Ihavebeenreallyenjoyingthiscontestthoroughly,especiallybecauseallthecontestantshaveapproachedthetopicfromdifferentperspectives.Allspeecheshavebeenwellresearched,withgoodthoughtsaswellasinterestingideas.Iamverypleasedtoseethatmostofyoudeliveredyourspeechwithgoodpronunciation,cleararticulation,withgoodeyecontactandapropermanner.Ontopofallthisyouallhavealsodemonstratedyourremarkableanalyticalabilities.Theimportanceoftodaygoesbeyondthecompetitionitself.Ialwaysliketosaythat”Lifeisajourney”.Languagelearningisalifelongexperienceandweneverfinishlearning,especiallyfortheEnglishlanguagewhichissoaliveandeverchanging.Soasyoumoveforwardwithyourlanguagelearningmakesureyouenjoyeverymomentofyourjourney.面对标新立异选手:Youreallyhavebeenverycreativeintryingtoclearoutyourpoint.Butthistime,itwasveryclearlystatedwhatwouldberequiredofyouinthespeech.Therefore,itisveryimportanttounderstandwhatisrequiredofyouandwhatisdemandedofyouinacompetition.面对跑题选手(或主题不明确选手)Intoday’scompetition,Ithinkyouarealittletoohastyinyourpreparationforthespeech.Forinstance,asyourtopicis“awordthatchangestheworld”,you‘dbettershowyourpointoutstraightly.Otherwisehowcouldyougrabtheaudiences’attentiontoyourspeech.Sonexttime,youjustreadcarefullyabouttheinstructionsbeforeyoustartmakingaspeech.Andtrytounderstandeverywordclearlyandcorrectly.对不能及时切入主题的选手:Ithinkthebasicrulesofcommunicationareuniversal,andapplyacrosslanguagesandcultures.Saywhatyoumean,andsayitinasclear,direct,andsimpleamanneraspossible.Andwhenyouaretalkingorwritingtosomeonefromadifferentcountry,don’tbeafraidtosaytheobviousthingfirst.面对发音不好的选手:Ihavetomentioninthiscompetitionthatyoustillneedtoimproveyourpronunciationespeciallyrhythmandsentencestress.Youneedtoimproveyourvowels.Itisstillveryimportant.Ithinkthat’sallIwanttosay.Thankyouverymuchforyourspeech.对表现好的选手Iamverymuchimpressedbythespeechyouhavemade.Tocomparewiththespeechofothers,youreallydidagreatjob.Ifeelgoodaboutthis.Firstofall,inyourpreparedspeech,youaremoretothepointandyourEnglishismorenatural.Secondly,yourpointisveryimpressive.Andyouprovidealotofexamplestosupportyourspeech.对即兴演讲的评论:Talkingaboutyourimpromptuspeech,Ithinkyouarequitesensitivetoanswerquestions.YouranswerisquitelogicalandIlikeit.对眼神交流/肢体语言把握好的选手:It'sworthmetioningthatyougiveusafantasticspeechwithanimpressivebeginning,endingorthefreetalk.Furthermore,youareenthusiasticthroughoutthespeech.Youmadegoodeyecontactwiththeaudienceandusedappropriatebodylanguageinthespeech..Youmadeyourspeechmorewonderfulandmoreperfectwithyourbodylanguage.Youlookedcool!适时对选手提出的建议:Weallknowalanguageisameansandthepurposeiscommunication.Whatreallymattersisthecouragetocomeandparticipateinthecontest.Ishouldlearnfromallofyou.However,therearestillsomeproblemsandmuchroomforimprovement.Iamgoingtoputforwardsomesuggestionsonhowtodobetterinthefuture.Haveyouthoughtaboutthisquestion:Whenyouprepareaspeech,thereissomethingmoreimportantthanlanguage.Whatisit?Itisidea.Ideascomebeforethelanguage.Ifyoudon’tknowwhattosay,ifyouhavenoideas,whatistheuseofthelanguage?So,youmustthink,andthinkagainanddecidewhatyouwanttosayandthenorganizeyourideas.OnepointIwanttoemphasizeisthatyoushouldhaveyourownapproach,yourownoriginalideas.Ifyouonlyborrowthingsfromothersorcopythingsfromsomereadymaterialsortextbooks,yourspeechisboundtofail.Inthiscontestwehearsomeexpressionsagainandagain.Then,weknowyouhavebeenborrowingthingsfromthesamesource.Toquotefromoneofthetopicsforimpromptuspeech:“Imaginationismoreimportantthanknowledge.”ThisisaquotationfromEinstein.Ifwewanttheworldtomoveforward,weneedimagination,andweneedcreativity.对即兴演讲的建议:Whenyouprepareyourimpromptuspeech,themostimportantthingistobeclearaboutthetopicyouhavechosen.Ifyoumissthepoint,howeverfluentandexpressiveyouare,yougetapoormark.Forexample,thereisatopic:Toerrishuman;toforgiveisdivine.Whenyouchoosethistopic,youshouldknowitmeanseverybodymakesmistakes,butifyouareabletoforgiveotherpeople’smistakes,thenyouareabetterbeing.Theemphasisisthesecondhalf.Ifyouonlytalkabouthowtodoyourbesttocorrectyourmistakes,youmissthepoint.Ifeelthispartisthemostdifficultpartofthecontest.Youhavetobequickforyoudon’thavemuchtimetoprepare;youhavetobeknowledgeableforyoumustunderstandthemeaningofthetopicproperly.对选手提出更高要求:So,youmusthaverealizedthecontesthasbecomemoredemanding,.Youneedtohavesomethingmorecreative.Andnextyear,youwouldbeexpectedtobeatanewandhigherstage.

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