各区二模开放英语2013作文汇总

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可接受的立意•做事要持之以恒;要有耐心•想要达到目的就要相信自己•做事不要半途而废•Look,Jim!Ithinkthepicturewantstotellusthatpatienceplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingsuccess.Justasisshowninthepicture,theboydigsseveralholesonthegroundtogetwater,buthefinallyleaveswithnothing.It’sobviousthathedoesn’tdiganyoftheholesdeepenough.Hedoesn’trealizehewillgetthewaterifhedigsalittlemoredeeperinthelasthole.Itwillbewiserforhimtodigoneholewithpatience.Aslongashekeepsdiggingit,hewillgetwhathewants.•It’sthesameinourlife.Facedwithvarioustasksinthelife,somepeopletendtolosetheirpatiencewithit.Theyalwaysfailtohangonalittlelongerandkeeptrying,whichfinallyleadstofailure.Whattheyshoulddoistotrytodevotemoretimeandenergytothetaskandtrytoaccomplishitpatiently.Onlyinthiswaycantheyfinallyachievesuccess.•Inaword,whatevertaskswearefacing,weshouldalwayskeepinmindthatpatienceiskeytosuccess.可以接受的立意:1.盲目做事不看结果,最终收获甚微;2.做事前应该准备充分才能确保收获;3.做事情要具有合适的工具;4.不仅关注所得,也要关注所失;Look,Jim!Ithinkthepicturewantstotellusthatweshouldn’tworkblindlywithoutconsideringhowmuchweactuallygain.Justasisshowninthepicture,theboyisbusypickingapplesfromatree.Obviously,hewilllosemostoftheapplesfromtheholeinthebasketbecausehedoesn’trealizethatthebasketisbroken.Ifhecheckshisbasketbeforepickingapplesblindly,hewilltakenoticeoftheholeandchangeitforanewone.Thushewillgetmoreapples.It’sthesameinourlife.Whendealingwithproblems,somepeopleoftenkeepmakingeffortsblindlyliketheboyinthepicture,notknowinghowmuchtheyactuallygain.Itisnotuntilmuchtimeandeffortshavebeenwastedandnothinghasbeenachievedthattheyrealizetheyaremakingmistakes.Butitistoolate.Onthecontrary,somepeopleneverdothingsblindly.Theywillconsiderallpossibleconditionsbeforetakingactions.Asaresult,theywillachievewhattheywant.SoIthinkweshouldopenoureyesandmakeeverybitofoureffortscount.Onlyinthiswaycanwereallyworkeffectivelyandkeepthe“apples”insideour“basket”.Doyouagree,Jim?可以接受的立意•1.合作有时是没有必要的。•2.做事要依靠自己。•Look,Jim!Ithinkthepicturewantstotellustostopunnecessaryteamwork.Justasisshowninthepicture,twomenarecooperatingtoplaytheflute,withoneholdingtheinstrumentandtheotherblowingintoit.Atfirstglance,itseemslikeaperfectexampleofcooperation.But,isthiskindofteamworknecessary?Asweallknow,afluteisdesignedtobeplayedbyonepersononly.Tosuccessfullyproducebeautifulmusicfromaflute,thereisaneedforthecooperationbetweenthemusician’shandsandmouth,butdefinitelynotbetweentwopeople.It’sthesameinourlife.Exampleslikethisarenotrareinourlife.Forexample,nowadayskidsarefrequentlyaskedtoworkingroups.Eveninsubjectslikemathandcreativewriting,whichdependonsoloflightsofthought,kidsareoftenexpectedtoactascommitteemembers.Idothinkteamworkissomethingweshouldvalue.However,weshouldn’toveruseteamwork.Thereisnopointinplayingthefluteasthemendointhepicture.Solet’sworkindependentlywhennecessary.立意及结尾常用句型weshoulddo…sth.playsaimportantrole…Itisimportanttodo…theimportanceof…weshouldkeepinmindthat…we’dbetterdo…it’sbettertodosth.thandothinkweshoulddosth.ratherthandosth.successbelongstothosewho…sth.isthekeytosuccess

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