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12018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（四）文学故事与诗歌一、与专题相关的话题项目历史与社会(Historyandsociety)，故事与诗歌(Storiesandpoems)二、与专题相关的知识准备1、相关单元7BUnit7Poems8AUnit2Numbers8AUnit6Ancientstories8BUnit4Cartoonsandcomicstrips9AUnit1Wisemeninhistory9AUnit2Greatminds9AUnit7TheAdventuresofTomSawyer9AUnit8Surprisingendings2、相关词汇*高频词(n.)poem,feeling,order,advice,group,well,shower,superman,seller,smile,crowd,number,gram,chess,prize,grain,chessboard,amount,rest,gold,traffic,accident,war,captain,soldier,midnight,side,army,trick,prince,queen,scene,cartoon,warning,role-play,symbol,program,basic,stage,actor,team,star,island,storm,jacket,wave,Olympics,agreement,pot,truth,bowl,metal,prison,boxing,racing,mistake,mind,sense,humour,invitation,university,pleasure,lecture,tonight,seat,universe,action,adventure,novel,frog,congratulations,steamboat,steam,writer,fence,task,yard,board,progress,pity,silence,while,deal,coat,gift,graduation,cent,present,knee,sign,chain,bill,step,set,comb,America，note,(v.)agree,disagree,rush,check,challenge,promise,double,realize,copy,understand,pull,celebrate,enter,succeed,steal,punish,record,match,play,score,doubt,seem,solve,fill,hit,consider,avoid,trust,obey,reduce,survey,pretend,count,afford,search,draw,(adj.)complete,wise,ancient,huge,main,stupid,empty,secret,pleasant,golden,real,certain,brave,correct,pale,humorous,careful,lazy,(adv.)aloud,instead,correctly,quietly,separately,exactly,(prep.)except*高频短语Notatall,beworriedabout,newspaperstand,rushout,acrowdof,alongtimeago,challenge...to...,andsoon,copydown,actout,makejokesabout,succeedindoing,exceptfor,befullof,intheend,comeon,comicstrip,popout,decideon,videocamera,playagainst,weatherforecast,lifejacket,thank2goodness,makeit,behappywith,fillwith...,runover,send...toprison,makesure,senseofhumour,let...down,byheart,takeaseat,withoutdifficulty,joinin,havenoidea,beintrouble,playajokeonsb,turningpoint,aseriesof,havearest,thinkof,comealong,whatapity,goondoing,insilence,afterawhile,turnsth.Over,tricksb.intodoingsth,lookfor,atlast,fix...on,holdout,underthenameof,*拓展词汇ordinary,rhyme,site,narrow,height,instructions,pyramid,Greek,capture,Trojan,bubble,thought,rough,sketch,effect,detailed,appear,mystery,crown,displace,confirmation,wresting,astronomer,genius,theory,audience,applause,achievement,philosopher,sympathy,lead,plot,celebrated,goods,accuse,album,beaccusedof...,fromtheon,giveup,onebyone,*经典句型1.Alongtimeago,therewas...2.Thankyoufor..........3.Theisastoryabout........4.....and..Aretwoofthemostpopularcartooncharactersintheworld.5.Itwasagreatsuccess.6.besoadj.that+从句7.I’mcertainthat......8.Everyonewasamazedathow.solvetheproblem.9.Ajourneyofathousandlibeginswithasinglestep.10.It’sapleasureto....11.such..that12.I’vegotanidea./Ihavenoidea.13.Ifyoudon’tlearntothinkwhenyouareyoung,youmayneverlearn.14.Whatapity！3三、经典例题郭敬明出生于1983年6月6日，四川人，中国知名小说家，《最小说》（ZUInovel）主编。自他的第一部作品《爱与痛的边缘》（ontheedgeofloveandhatred）在2002问世以来，他共撰写著名作品30余部。其中，系列作品《小时代》（Tinytimes）深受年轻读者喜爱。这个系列作品以全新的叙事风格，通过对几位当代青少年和大学生生活的描写，表达了作者对整个社会观察和思考，是一部优秀的作品。小时候大部分时间在家埋头苦读，求学阶段曾经从上海大学辍学，但对文学的执着和自身的努力和自信，使他一步一步迈进了成功的殿堂。你对郭敬明的看法。提示：1、这是一篇文学（艺术）名家介绍类作文。介绍人物及其文学（艺术）作品时，应该按照作品的角色、情节、社会地位影响等方面进行叙述。2、分三个自然段来描述。第一段介绍人物背景知识，第二段介绍其文学（艺术）代表作和成就，第三段提取人物的优秀品质，补充自己的看法。解题思路：1.审题：a.本文共有4个要点b.时态主要采用一般现在时或一般过去时c.人称是第三人称2.可能用到的短语和句型:bebornin/on、bewellknownas、hisworkcalled...、over30works、sincethen、beverypopularwith、turnedout、stickto、dropoutofschool、keptondoingsth.、leadto、inmyopinion3.连句成文与修改评分（每行一处修改提升点，答案见范文）4GuojingmingwasborninJune6th,1983inSiChuan.Hewasafamousnovelistaswellasthechiefeditorof“ZUInovel”.Sincehisfirstwork——“ontheedgeofloveandhatred”waspublishedin2002,hehasproducedmorethan30literatureworks.Amongthem,theseries——“Tinytimes”iswell-receivedbyteenreaders.Withthedescriptionofthemodernlifeofseveralteenagersanduniversitystudentsinanewway,“Tinytimes”expresstheobservationandthinkingfromtheauthor,whichisaexcellent_________5work.ThoughGuoachievedalot,hewaytosuccesswasnotsmoothatall.Hespentmostofhistimereadathomewhenhewasyoung.Besides,hedroppedoutofschoolfromShangHaiUniversity.However,hewaskeenonliteratureandstronglybelievedinhimself.Finally,hiseffortandconfidencebroughthimgreatsuccess!Inmyview,heisreallyanidolofusandweshouldlearnfromhim!_________点评：在描述人物背景的部分懂得运用aswellas和非限定性定从来叙述信息；此外，在介绍作品的时候用到with短语以及让步状语从句，这些都能体现写作用语的丰富性。Besides，finally，however等连接性词语使文章更为流畅，更加紧密。时态和信息都能准确选取和表达。有些从句用得比较生硬，动词、介词搭配和冠词也有错误。4、分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容6分1切合题意，体现要点2有所发挥6准确性6分1语法2词组句型3机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误3.5流畅性3分段落，过渡词，过渡句3自评总分：12.55.参考例文：GuoJingmingwasbornon6June,1983inSichuanProvince.HeiswellknownasaChinesenovelistandthechiefeditorof“ZuiNovel”.Asawriter,Guocreatedhisfirstworkcalled“TheEdgeofLoveAndPain”in2002.Sincethen,hehaswrittenover30works,amongwhichaseriesnamed“Tinytimes”isverypopularwithyoungreaders.“Tinytimes”mainlydescribeaboutagroupofyouthandtheiruniversitylives.Theworksrevealthewriter’sopinionsaboutoursociety.Sotheyturnedouttobeasuccess.6Mostteenagerslikehimbecausehestickstohisdreamofliteratureandbecomessuccessfulthroughhardwork.AlthoughdroppingoutofschoolfromShanghaiUniversity,hest