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Sixstepsforthewritingpractice:HowtogetonwithourparentsStep1:examinethetopicStyle:______________________________________tense:______________person:_______________Paragraphs:Paragraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:议论文（ArgumentativeWriting）presentfirstthecommonproblem:parentscareforeverythinghowparentscareforeverythignofusthewaytosolvetheproblemStep2:listthemainpoints1.thesameproblem2.careforeverything3.makethegenerationgapdeeper4.worryabouteverything5.makeusgrowuphealthilyandlivehappily6.moreunderstandingbetween…Step3:makesomesentences:1.Wehavethesameproblem.2.Ourparentscareforeverythingofus.3.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddo.4.Theydonotletusdowhatweliketodo.5.Thegenerationgapisdeeper.6.Thepurposeistomakeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.7.Wearepartoftheirlife.8.Wecarrytheirhopeandexpectation.9.Weshouldunderstandeachother.10.Inthisway,wecangetonwellwitheachother.Step4&5:connectthesentencesandmakesomeappolishment.Step6:Copyitoutcarefullyandclearly.Proofreading(findout5errors)Ourparentsconcernabouteverythingthatwehavedone,whichmakeusannoyed.Theyalwaysworryabouteverythingandeverybody,suchasourstudy,entertainmentandfriends.Asisoftenthecase,theysometimeslookourdiarywithoutourpermit.“It’sgoodforyou.”explaintheyeverytimeweaskthemwhy.Childrenasweare,therearesomebasicpersonalrights,whichshouldbeprotected.Howtogetonwellwithourparents?It’saproblem.However,thereisnoreasonforustobeagainsttoourparentsjustbecauseofit.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstand.It’syoursincerityandpatiencecancalltheirrespectonyou.Whynothaveatry?_______makes_____read___________permission＼∧thatSuggestionsformakingourwritingoutstanding:1.advancedwordsandphrases;2.differentabundantsentencepatterns;3.correctconjunctions.Somecopiesfromourhomework:Copy1:Itseemsthatourparentscaretoomuchaboutus.Forexample,theyaretellinguswhatweshoulddoandwhatwemustn’tdoallthetimeandtheyalsoworryaboutallthatwedo.Inordertokeepusgrowinghealthilyandhappily,theyevenwantustostayathomeforawholedayatweekendsifpossible.However,wefeelitdifficulttobreatheundersuchheavypressure.Wewanttohavemorefreedomandmakedecisionsbyourselves.Allinall,weshouldgivemoreunderstandingtoourparents.Asweknow,alltheparentslovetheirchildren.Soifweshowourlovetothemproperly,theywillunderstandus,too.16Copy2:Whatwemustfacewithisthatourparentsalwaysgeteverythingofusundercontrol,whichmakesusfeelratheruncomfortable.Toourdisappointment,parentsalwaysworryaboutwhatweweareveryday,howwebehaveatschoolandourstudies,ourmeals,eventhefriendswehavemade.What’smore,theyoftensaythattheintensionfortheseistoletusgrowuphealthilyandhappily.Forfearoftheirfeelingsad,wehavetoactastheyrequire,ratherthansayaword.ChildasIam,Ientirelyunderstandmyparents.Ithinkthekeytoitistounderstandthem.Ontheotherhand,weshouldmakeourparentsunderstandus,either.Withthelovebetweenparentsandus,wecanleadacomfortableandsensefullife!19Copy3:Itisbelievedthatourparentsalwayspayattentiontoeverythingwedo.Theymakeitarulethatwhateverwedo,weshouldtellthem.Forexample,tellthemthereasonandyoucangetthemoneywhichyouaskfor.Tellthemwhereyougoandthenyoucangoout.Theyalwaysworryaboutus.Theytakeitforgrantedthatwhatevertheydoforusisgood.Theyonlywantustolivehappilyandhealthily.However,hardlydotheychangetheirmindnomatterhowwecomplain.Theapproachtosolvetheproblemistounderstandourparentsandmakeourselvesunderstood.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetonwellwithourparents.20Copy4:Ourparentscareforeverythingwedo.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddoandstopusdoingwhateverweliketodo,whichmakesourgenerationgapdeeper.However,asourparents,whatevertheydoismakeusgrowuphealthilyandlivehappily.Fromthetimewewereborn,theyworryaboutwhatweeat,howmuchsleepwegetandhowwebehaveatschool.Infact,wehavebeenbecomgpartoftheirlivesandcarryingalltheirhopesandexpectationsfromourbirth.Itistheywhobringourlivesaswellascomfortinlife.Therefore,moreunderstandingbetweenusisamusttoshortenourgapandimproveourrelationship.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetonwellwitheachotherandenjoythecompanionship.(apossibleversion)Somewonderfulsentencesfromourhomework:1.Notuntilweunderstandourparents’concernandhopeonuscanwefeelthelovedeeplyfromtheirhearts.2.Whatreallymakesusuncomfortableisthatourparentsworryabouteverythingwehavedone.3.Thebetterweunderstandourparents,theeasieritwillbetogetalongwiththem.4.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstood.5.Wehaveeveryreasontobelievetheirpurposeofourgrowinguphealthilyandhappily.6.Ourparentsmanageeverythingofus,whichisbeyondwhatwecanstand.7.Whattheydon’tknowisthatitwilltakeawayourfreedomandmakeusunhappy.Sixprinciplesofmakingsentences(造句成文六大原则)：1.advancedwords(高级词汇原则)2.adverbialadvanceed(状语提前原则)3.phrasespreferred(短语优先原则)4.compoundsentence,compositesentenceandsentenceofspecialkind(并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)5.longandshortsentencesalternately(长短句交替原则)6.passagesinparagraphs(短文分段分层原则)Fivecharacteristicsofoutstandingwriting:(高分作文的五大特性)1.senseoforder(条理性:段落完整，层次分明）2.accuracy(准确性:语法准确，用词精当）3.fluency(流畅性:层次清晰，行文连贯）4.conciseness&variety(简洁、多样性:语言简洁，不重复）5.ideologicalcontent(思想性:文章立意高，表达个人观点内容积极向上）